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Rewrite of my first story that got me into writing.-
Jake Barriss is dropped into the world of Danmachi with the ability to combine all things into one. Will he fall to the dungeon? Or will he leave his mark on the immortal realm of Genkai
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Eh overall i kinda prefer the original. Yeah it was kinda ridiclous but since it already set up such a ridiculous start, it was always expected that it wasn't going to turn completely serious. Here while i do like that he joined the Hephaestus Familia, the info drop that this was set years prior to the start of canon was a little jarring as it never felt that it was set in the past. Besides that, the ocs aren' t really clicking i mean we have Tina(i think that was her name was) is just an oc version of pretty much Liliruka.Yeah sure the original wasn't perfect and had a lot of changes to canon but it was pretty much consistent. Overall, i kinda miss the original one.
can't wait for more chapters, the original was really good, and this is a rewrite with a different starting point. even the MC ability is slightly different than the original, which is good cause then we know that this isn't a copy an paste fan fiction.
really like the fanfic and how it's put in the 'golden' era of adventuring.plus I really appreciate the OCs
really good writing of the characters and conversations, doesn't at all feel like a robot talking or it's too much cringe that you can't even look at it. overall this story is a really good read.
50 capitulos en un año, dejame decir que estoy decepcionado, pero encontrar una historia divertida y genial, que no abusa de etiqueta como "Tragedias" y "traición" es difícil hoy en día, me preguntó que les pasa a esos autores? Tienen problemas en casa? Mi opinión es que está historia es genial, te lo pierdes si no la lees, buena gramática y agradables diálogos, el mc de este autor es generalmente OP, no le halló ningún problema, en fin, bueno provecho.
the only redeeming point about this novel is the character personalities which are well built. however the whole other bunch of the story is a slightly fiasco: no detailed world context, no clear power progression, dumb protagonist decisions couldve been a masterpiece, though i guess the author does not seek serious storytelling, but rather a kind of simple minded fic
aza man, you can delete books now! now all the books you dropped that quite literally, hit the leaderboard every single time can be cleaned up!
phenomenal story great background of the characters in great development everybody hates Zeus family and everybody wants to see a steal kill of The Great quest
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Este es uno, o quizás el mejor fanfiction de dannachi que e visto. El único que está a la par, es irónicamente el otro que creo el mismo autor y que incluso comparte el nombre del protagonista.
Es un buen fanfic, pero la baja tasa de actualización en comparación con la longitud de los capítulos, arruina un poco la experiencia, por todo lo demás está bien.
I like the way the stories development so far because it's based in the past of Zeus and Hera familia you can get to see some of that time and how the story will change drastically with the protagonist
Amazing unique fic set in the time when Zeus and Hera familias are still at their peak! Very unique and nicely written plus the MC is loyal to his wife which made the whole story a million times better.
Great story of "Golden era" danmachi. Very interesting see MC in such high level environment?👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
It's a rewrite from a good author who has gotten better