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After Li Chen died, he finds himself reincarnated in Feng Jianyu body,
He has now found himself in a world filled with powerful cultivators who form Sects or Join Sects to strive cultivation.
This is Feng Jianyu journey in the majestic world of cultivation filled with sects .
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For those who want to read this, if you hate dumb main characters that is dumber than a donkey. Don't read it aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
just I usually don't mind grammar but when it's nearly every sentence I just can't .
this is a boring novel.. the MC is soooooooo dumb he makes my phone lag when I'm reading this.. the system is irritating and the whole vibe is just down the drain.. let's not butter up this novel it sucks
I would give less stars if I could, stupid system stupid MC stupid concept all around just a waste of time on everyone’ part... ….
Absolutely atrocius quality, I read Machine translation regularly. I will not read this. Story idea is nice but the actual development isn't interesting.
Don't bother reading this, it's the same cultivation novels template with boring cultivation system and world building, the main character is just plain stupid, the grammar is so bad that you lose brain cells every paragraph, the system is just terrible and annoying, what a great idea to make the one thing that will appear in almost every chapter extremely annoying, and why does it punish the main character every time he swears? Did the author really think that's interesting? I can go on and on just read at your own risk of losing brain cells.
Note to author: I haven't read this yet but there are a ton of negative reviews. Aye bro. Don't give up writing. It's like when we were little and used to try to tell grown ups our stories and things. At first we couldn't convey our messages clearly because we were too young. With more time and experience we learned how to express ourselves better. But even when we got a little older and learned how to say things more coherently our stories sometimes turned out to not be as grand as we thought them to be. Maybe this is like that. Don't give up.
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Chapter 30, i can't take anymore. The biggest problem here theres no space of every conversation. Just imagine the the whole parangraph and the author included the conversation of every characters, how long is that when you reading it?
This story is absolutely garbage. The mc was super dumb. The system was punishing type, it also mocked mc when it has a chance too. I couldn't make it pass 5th chapter.
It irritates me always curses on things short minded mc does not know how to think almost always over react on thing it's just obnoxious for me.
The MC was a coward but suddenly turns courageous, when facing the boar he was like I close my eyes and you can’t see me kinda scaredy-cat but suddenly becomes very bold. Also the MC is a slave of the system that has to listen to everything it says or he will get punished by decreasing mission time limit or taking away system points that is a slavery system not sect system.
very badly written too cliche there was no need for the girl, in the beginning, to be present or even be with the mc not being misogynistic but it's just too cliche I am starting to hate romance/harem in novels its just bad to me The system is way too controlling the MC doesn't fit the character of someone who should be the sect leader Everything is done too hastily
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I can't even get through the first free chapters since there are so many Grammer mistakes. I came to read what could have been a compelling story but I can't find it under all the problems covering the chapter. I have stuck through something similar to this to the 1000 chapter because they at least kept the mistakes to a point where you could understand the story with out trying to decipher it.
Story great from the start gives minimum background of the world and the character get a great character development as the story progresses. Only draw back is that after some 300 chapters you can't read the novel as it's full of grammatical error as it useless as we can't get the content of the story from that. Other than that it's a good story.
The premise was interesting as one of the few sect building stories on this platform, but the execution was ... questionable with a lot of grammatical errors and the story doesn't weave together well. The story has potential but the use of english was anything but well made
Wouldn’t mind reading more, just not worth paying for 83 chapters based on the free ones due to large errors and forgetfulness. Hopefully Webnovel changes the system some day.
Grammar make it impossible for me to read it + several obvious problem with mc character (lack of explanation for the change of caracter Et….)
Well i don't really understand why you made your premium chapters with no grammar issue but kept your free chapters full of errors..... (they are the most important because it's them that make the readers stay or leave) Other than this your novel is pretty good.