/ Urban / My Roleplay Server (Dropped)
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Given the chance to reincarnate in a world with two wishes, who would say no? Especially when you could live a life you've always wanted.
This is supposed to be a relaxed story about a man fulfilling the dreams he couldn't in his first life. There will still be drama and more adult things, but overall it will be pretty chill.
The action of the story will come in when he finishes making the server.
As of right now, 4/6/2022, it's looking like this is going to be a slower-paced novel. Hopefully, in the future, I can get the pacing downright.
This is my first released story, so feel free to give me all your constructive criticism. I do plan on finishing this story.
Please point out any mistakes you see.
This novel is also on Royal Road and Scribble Hub.
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love it great concept great execution and well written sure there are a few places that don't flow but I believe it will get better sooner rather than later.
I think it good, but I am obviously biased. Anyway, all honest and constrictive reviews are welcome. I will admit the novel is slower than I wanted it to be. But I feel that as long as I work hard on it, can really put something I am proud of out. Anyway, whether you liked it or not, thank you for reading!
Please more. I am really enjoying your writing style. But i read too fast. I have read whats there and for the past week ive just been waiting for more chapters. Keep up the great work!
From what i have read till now (chapter 17) it has a really interesting premise which holds potential for good arcs and also a nice slow slice of life pacing which i absolutely like! So please Author continue with this pace but with consistent updates!