概要
Akira Kuromiya is just an average high schooler who gets killed by a robber. He wakes up and is now a chicken!? Even worse he becomes the familiar of a girl who"s apparently the heiress of a powerful clan.
That was for a short while though, as he was abandoned and woke up to find out he, now she, is trapped in a deadly magical forest with all sorts creatures trying to kill her.
The world she finds herself is one of magic and monsters like the manga she's been reading. Akira, now Hinotori is trying to live her life as a chicken in another world!
Tags: Isekai, Adventure, Action, Weak-to-strong, Monster, Evolution, System, LitRPG, Yuri, Overpowered MC, Harem, Demons
The book is quite slow paced, with some arcs seeming quite useless and boring. However, I promise, every arc is important and I urge you to continue. If you can't, I won't try to stop you because the choice is yours.
Over the few months this story's been up I've come to notice one common comment. The MC is stupid. Well, that's just how she is at the the beginning. A selfish entitled brat who believed the world was against her(previously him) after some mistakes she made. I mean, what's a story without personal growth? The character growth is slow and annoying, but it's there. MC will have to learn to make the bigger and smarter decisions with not only his life on the line. If you also can't wait to see a person change, that's fine too. I can't change your mind on that. All I'm saying is give it a shot.
Anyway, that's it for my blurb!
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Dumb mc for someone who’s a neet, he doesn’t seem to use his brain... not going into much detail suggest you read the first 5 to 10 chapter to understand what I’m talking about.
eh…4 chapters in and the mc kinda dumb so imma just drop this here quick…and no don’t reply cuz i ai ‘t gonna tell you why i dropped it so early
So far I'm like 60 chapters in and I've been really in enjoying it so far. I'm just wondering if you could provide some tags or something so that I can have a better idea of what I'm getting myself into like romance etc
It's not just that the mc is incredibly dumb (he gains skills by eating a bite of dead enemies and has left about 1/3 of them untouched so far), but the author is all over the place. Mc uses skills in earlier chapters that he didn't acquire until later chapters...at least twice now in the 14 chapters I read. Mc gets skills, gains, plot armor, and deus ex machina saves from a weird skill that has ignored him almost dying many times, but then performs fantastic miracles during the next near-death experience.
So I’ve seen two types of reviews here the type that reads ten chapters in and then says dumb Mc and the ones that read up to 90 and are addicted. Honest opinion, it seems a lot like that time I got reincarnated as a slime. Don’t know if it was made that way or what. Love the story over all very slow but bearable.
I haven't read a lot of chapters, but I've seen it seems our mc is a bit stupid. the writing doesn't matter to me, I just don't like it when at the beginning of the story mc is already tied to a stronger creature, i think the story will be more interesting if our mc is allowed to develop their own strength
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Can anyone tell me where chapter the mc gain enough IQ so I can start reading there Do not worry i will change my review after reading either for bad or good
First of all... writing in first 50 chapters is bad, very bad. Fortunatly it gets better although gramatical mistakes remain. Story and characters are average at best, but this is in my opinion because of poor writing. The world building is a big mess but this again in opinion is because the characters that are introduced are not used for world building but more as filler. Overall a decent one if one manages to get past the first ~50 chapters that are.... (red to chapter 224 as of this review)
Others may say this is bad, but I like the mc's personality(Seriously have you seen illusia's personality from reborn as a dragon egg) the only thing I find bad will be the speed of chp release. other than that
A very weak, unstable, indecisive MC with bad instincts and worse social skills. The early chapters are a drag.
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This book was amazing. It is the second book on Webnovel that I have ever reviewed and, if not for the length, the better of the two. Needs Letters
I've read about 100 chapters and there are many things about this novel that are not good. Such as, inconsistencies with grammar, there not really being a solid line in your head where you can think "Okay so the main character can fight someone in the B rank, but A rank is too much", I'm honestly unsure how strong the main character is, though I did mostly read this while sick, so that may have played a part in it. It feels like this novel is badly translated somehow, if that makes any sense. You can read it to see what I mean if you want to, and I wouldn't call this novel "trash", but there are definitely inconsistent things going on that need to be sorted out. I'm unsure if the writing quality picks up later, but if it's a slog to read through the first 100 chapters then who would expect anything better in the next 100. Anyhow, I do have a very high respect for authors in general, and I hope the author doesn't take this as some sort of attack.
the Mc is really dumb, he blames the system for everything and crystal very often. and his battle ideas are really poor. don't waiste your time reading this you will get annoyed
(Haven't read it yet actually tehe) Really urgent question! does she/he lay eggs? This question is of great importance to me and I wish for answers!!
And it shall continue from where we left off so let's all get back and start reading this unique and exquisite story and enjoy it😙🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗