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Hello readers, this is my first novel so I hope you like it. I'll try to see all the feedback I can from comments but I do have a daily 8 hour job so not always. I've read a ton of FanFics, and let me tell you this first, there will be NO memory wipes, main character killing, or random hardmode extra entities or anything trying to mess with the MC. Every world he goes to will be following cannon for the most part, weather he messes with anything is up to me (some gods already there might try to mess with him but that's later lol) I know people love systems but that will probably be my next FanFic because I have a few ideas for a new one but while I have this one in my head I want to write it down, but keep in mind this is really for my own entertainment. My main language is English so don't worry about grammar mistakes, I will proof read myself to make sure of that and edit as I see mistakes. If I forget something in one or more worlds please let me know and I'll try to fix it asap. Enjoy :) At least 1 chapter a day, maybe 2 if I'm feeling ambitious and probably 2-3 on weekends. I'll try to hit 2k words at the minimum as well for decently long chaps.
Disclaimer: I own nothing except my own MC.
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The writing quality is good and the author let the MC integrate in the world in a way. I know author even said it in synopsis, but in summary MC is mainly an overpowered bystander which behaves simpy and a bit like a Drama Queen. kind of curious if this review gets deleted cause the honest rating will bring down the average 😂
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ngl I like the story it's just... that that 'hehe' is the author's freaking beard and butter! he put it in every dialogue the mc has! even when it doesn't make any freaking sense!
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OP MC + Harem which I like however the cringe is too much, it became so cringy that only two chapters in I suddenly turned into a Chinese cultivator and started coughing blood.
Очень скучно и нелепо, сюжета нет, раскрытия мира нет обычный главный герой я не виду в нем нечего нового. !!!АУФ!!! Очень скучно и нелепо, сюжета нет, раскрытия мира нет обычный главный герой я не виду в нем нечего нового. !!!АУФ!!!
Super story with a good mc , with a good romance . The only bad point is its some time really clingue but in the end your story is awesome keep up the good work and pls don t drop Good bye 👋
interesting story 😊👍👍🏿👍👍🏿👍👍🏿👍👍🏿👍🏿👍👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍👍👍🏿👍👍🏿👍🏿👌👌👍👍🏿👍👍🏿👍👍🏿👍👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👌👌👌👍🏿👍🏿😊👍🏿👍👍🏿👍👍👍👍🏿👍👍🏿👍👍👍🏿👍🏿
Really nice, i look forward to more time changing shenanigans.........................................................................................
it's good but its like really fast paced, I mean it's a nice story but like its developing way to fast not much details in-between . .
Very Nice .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . .. . .. . . . . . .. .
I really like it Pls put more chapters Pls put more chapters Pls put more chapters Pls put more chaptersPls put more chaptersPls put more chapters
So For Any Over-Realistic reader that reads and reviews a story like it was made by Shakespeare himself that come across this story It's a harem and op mc.
its just mostly a retelling of the original plot from what I've read no real interference at all, read upto chapter 9 the whole story feels mostly like a summary of events.