概要
[WPC DEC & JAN 2023 [Fantasy] WINNER!]
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[Talent: Future Seer]
The path to immortality is always a cruel one to tread.
In a world where the Wizard reigns supreme and spells are everything.
Watch Aur’s journey as he walks down the path of immortality, albeit not in a conventional manner.
Muscles!
With the muscle system in hand, he forges a path for himself, slaughtering all his enemies with a punch. But in this world filled with schemes, can he reach the pinnacle or will he perish falling into the spiral of schemes?
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[Scene from the Novel]
"Aren't you supposed to be an ordinary wizard? How are you so strong?" The man muttered as the very earth crumbled, and the mountains behind him split with the sheer pressure of the giant fist descending on him.
There was no surprise the man was crushed into meat paste. Aur looked at the distant sun.
"Throughout Heaven and Earth, I have the strongest muscle," Aur shouted as countless shadows appeared in the corner of his vision.
“You are going to die today,” The tone was cold and unforgiving, with countless figures appearing one by one.
“You cannot re-establish the Laws of this universe again.”
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A must read book, as the story unfold , you'll find Mc navigating the treacherous path with his even more treacherous ways.
I was sceptical at first when reading the first chapters, and i found some of the story quite lacking, but it got a lot better later in the story. So accept some lower quality with the knowledge of it getting a lot better. I would recommebd this book, the only thing lacking is that it only releases 3 chapters per. Week. That is also why i write this review despite not doing so usually, because i want more chapters👀 Read it.
Amazing novel, I truly have never seen such a wonderful story. I need more chapters, I don't think I can survive without reading more!!
Honestly the writings not bad but the story it's self is just boring I never understood why people write stories about rencarnators in a child's body it's just wierd and gets annoying quick. I would understand if it was for a little bit but this is not
The title is really funny🫵. And story seemed to be interesting . More chapters author! So I can read more.
I like the story and the concept up to the current 25 chapters. But sadly it seems like there is no proofreading or checking being done since most of my cons are about the grammar, pronouns etc...I would love for the grammar to improve and see where the story goes.
please improve your writing quality and erase meaningless talks and focus on the plot (If you have any ) related to the story . main character is cool and intelligent but Aurelius don't focus on pointless characters which will not appear later and please work on update stability the novel have huge potential it's just have dull edges which needs a little sharpening to create a masterpiece.
Can't really tell much in so few chapters but since it's Aurelius, I'm sure it's gonna be another banger
how are you going to name your novel on "muscles" and have your mc be 6'1 at only 70 kgs ,that's skinny af for a tall guy , disappointing.
passable. it lacks that spark that makes a book good but doesn't really have any of the typical deficiencies. i was waiting for this to capture me but it didn't which is a bummer. ultimately idk it's your call
160lbs at 6’1” tall means the MC is a literally twig with ZERO muscle… he should be at LEAST 190lbs to qualify as having “muscles” cause even being 190lbs means it’s all lean muscle.
Murder is bad, but EVERYBODY, EVERYWHERE, ALL THE TIME, ALL AT ONCE be murdering. Also he is still a mage, just more battlemage than ranged traditional caster wizard.
Anyone who thinks this book deserves less than five star rating should burn. . opps The author has careful crafted every character with their unique personality. Mc is definitely not annoying "thank God" I'm not one to judge grammar cos I don't know much about it but I don't see mistakes. If you read it, then go ahead and read this book, and thank me later.
I will read soon, but its Aure, so 5 stars, WHAT IS LOVE?????? OH BABY DON'T HURT ME, DON'T HURT ME, NO MOREEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT IS LOVE?????? OH BABY DON'T HURT ME, DON'T HURT ME, NO MOREEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
When I started reading this novel, I seemed a little boring to me. But when I kept reading it, I got to like it even more. Although I'm an author myself, I kinda like this story more. I'm learning from you so do well to teach me more
This is actually a pretty decent read. I had always avoided this book because I typically prefer stories with magic-wielding protagonists. However, when someone described the main character as a “close-combat mage,” I decided to give it a try. Unfortunately, I can’t give it 5 stars. Without spoiling too much, as the story progresses, the main character stops advancing on the wizard path. It almost feels like the author went out of their way to force this to happen—perhaps to avoid the story becoming too much like a typical mage tale. I’m not sure, but either way, I decided to drop it immediately.
2+1+1+3+1)/5=1.6 bruh..... I initially thought i found a fun exciting read. i stockpiled for a while before reading the premium chapters ....... i regret this...... we go from a very clearly adventurer world with what seems to be the typical middle age level civilization plus whatever isekai innovations the author can come up with. the premium then jumps into a full blown school without a proper transition from the previous dungeon .... we get two hints about the world and the mc. the mc calls it an alternate earth instead of another world. and he occasionally mentions dieing with a nuke/bomb and being a gang leader. otherwise, the academy tech level and the random latinas came out of the blue. then we learn that the mc and the protagonist template character are; well, I didn't see any disclaimer that the mc was not a goody goody. I thought he was an edgelord and what some of the other reincarnated bad guys were, just dealt a shitty deck. but na. he likes living like he's the only one that matters and the others are only there to be good stepping stones or get the hell of the way and maybe be roughly "helped" away. basically i didn't see enough of a buildup and feel like this was very blatantly pulled out of an a*s. grammar was mostly good. the world and the latinas confuse me.
Hello this book is the combination of action/magic/reincarnation. Nothing much to say here if You have Any question ask away [img=strong]