概要
"Master, I'm sorry... It's all my fault that you could not break through before your last moments."
"Don't worry, my disciple. I will not die," said Xu Fan as he smiled at his disciple, whose face was covered with tears.
“If only… If only I could get you a few more Foundation Establishment Pills..." The genius of the sect knelt on the floor while crying like a baby.
Xu Fan looked at his oldest disciple and sighed. He then took out a Foundation Establishment Pill and nonchalantly threw it into his mouth.
The next second, divine lights of five different colors filled the world.
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great slice of life type novel it's great the premises is that the master can't level up till he is on the end of his lifespan which makes it intresting as we can see how he lives a life where everyone he knows becomes stronger or dies before him so hope this get picked
I have no idea what this is. I just know its probably a master-disciple novel, and the MC will be old. That in itself already separates this novel from quite literally most anything on this website. That is why I want this to be chosen.
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Loli Loli asking him to marry her Mc agreed. This Novel= 1 Star Trash Loli Loli asking him to marry her Mc agreed. This Novel= 1 Star Trash
He is literally a Son of a *** Simp can't even reject a Girl that he not loves to not become his Wife.. All Simp Author go to h. .ell.😑
Read it until around chapter 100 in the raws. Slow story. This is certainly not a xianxia power rush. As another commenter as said, this is more like a slice of life novel. Some things to note: Just the fact that the MC's first major cultivation level has needed dozens of chapters to breakthrough should give the reader the right expectancy. The plot is the usual for this type of novel so don't expect great originality. The writing cannot be considered very good, but it is way above what we poor mortals are usually been fed in this site. The author seem to have done some little research about what he is talking about and not just spiting completely random BS just because it looks cool. Some characters are not just zero dimensional and could actually menace to reach 1 dim. In particular the MC. The author has managed to use all the tired and overtried chinese webnovel MC pseudo characteristics but managed to make them blend into something of a silhouette of a human being. That is a real achievement. This also means that our MC is not a copy of schwarzenegger's terminator. Unfortunately this also means that there are irritating situations and characters that hinder our easy reading flow. Some because of the way this caricature of a world influence its beings, and some just because the author is not that good at humor as needed in those cases. Note that this not mean that this story doesn't have humor. On the contrary. There is plenty of soft and even subtle humor, which is appropriate for a slice of life type of story. ... This author gives the feel of someone who is on its way to be a very capable professional writer, but only the future can tell. All in all this novel is readable and, given our drought of good books to read, might even deserve a 4 stars rating from me.
Read chapter 12 before you wasted your time reading this 11617171771717171717172727727263637366362612663738399937736261689191928383461891917373
I don't understand why there are so many comments about the main character accepting the affection from the loli. It isn't pedophilia since there is no sexual attraction between them. Neither are they going to marry anytime soon. It is only an exchange in betrothal gifts to confirm their marriage in the future. Plus, it isn't even confirmed that the main character would follow through since he is just placating the loli right now. After all he can't just reject her cold heartedly, she is the close childhood friend he grew up with when he was young.
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I hope the worst fit the Author of this Novel.....I Really Really Really Really hope the worst for this trash Author. I would literally smile seeing him suffering because the torture he did to me in chapter 12 is unimaginable.
If you liked "a thousand year providence", you will definitely like this one. The premice is that the mc can only breakthrough at the end of his life, so he focus on other occupation (mainly alchemy and blacksmith). The system is almost absent and only make the mc sure to breakthrough on his last day. So if you're annoyed at those novels where the system does everything and more for the mc, don't worry. For now, every character has been detailed at least a bit, but not that much. All in all, really good for a trial novel. Give it a try, you won't be disappointed.
mc pedophilia .................................................................................................................................................
Amazing new concept of story of MC being lowkey, i even read the mtl haha. That system is really no help to MC except for the end of his life span and breakthrough.
Story is well paced, and characters doesn't feel shallow moreover there interaction feels natural. Mc is cool headed, he stays low key but not at extreme level. He also shows off sometime (which doesn't effect much). He will also travel to other places like secret realm(specially mentioned because some low key mc just stays at room) Also I will say translation quality can be improved, there were error in one or two sentences so far, rest is good. And world background is slowly raveled, it doesn't feel like information dump nor does it feel like it's lacking in information, overall it's good. So I can confidently say go ahead and read it. Current Reading status:- 20 chaps
trash after chapter 170 his sect got destroyed and he made a new sect and it became all about the sect and him refining something and every one got awed everytime
I simply like it as well as a new kind of novel ‐------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
A história é ótima muito envolvente, mas não tem nem uma dessas merda q a webnovel gosta como enredos muito clichê ou algum erro muito feio o rpteiro então não vai ser escolhida, tenho 90% de certeza, mas se fosse uma história ruim iria ser escolhida pq esse site é muito mal gerenciado, e se algum souber outros site por favor me fala já cansei desse.
apparently it's trash in the later chapters he apparently makes clones and they do the work instead of him I truly them since alot has said it and it has that feeling but just keep reading it maybe it's because of translation
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This is an amazing novel, though the actual title should be "My master keeps breaking through at the end of his lifespan. " The novel is just about that - The MC has to live out the lifespan of every stage of cultivation, but he's guaranteed to break through. As he cannot cultivate, he gets to dabble deeply into auxillary methods, such as spellcrafting, puppetry, or alchemy. The novel is absolutely amazing, as it focuses on the life of a cultivator instead of cultivation. I haven't read it in a while, but from what I managed the author also makes sure not to bore reader to death by making MC stuck on a cultivation stage for 1k chapters.