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章 151: A problem with Ian's body

Fortunately, all of their misunderstandings had finally been cleared up and now he only wanted one thing, to be able to take control of his elements so that he could stand with Liam without being afraid of being a burden for him.

But, after only 10 minutes of training with Kevin, he saw him frown and finally Kevin told him to stop and to follow him.

Ian didn't know what could have made Kevin frown like that, he had already warned him that he wasn't very good at fighting so it couldn't have something to do with that, right ?

They joined Alan who after showing the basic movements to Ashton made him practice on a dummy and as he was standing a little apart from him, Kevin said to him without preamble in a voice no louder than a whisper : "There is a problem with Ian's body, but I can't fix it here, we have to go to a place where no one will see us because I have no idea how his body will react."


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hello everyone

I need your advice because I'm not sure if using 'disrupt' is the right word here, well this chapter was hard to translate so I used example to explain what I wanted to say, hope it is okay ...

thank you so much for your support

take care everyone and have a great day :) <3

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