MY Life In The Multiverse

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Spelloyal

The fanfic is interesting and well written, but it has a really annoying problem that made me give it 3 stars. The mc is a slave to the system, he cannot refuse any missions and they all have absurd failure punishments like eternal virginity, loss of status and death, death and more death. It's okay if the missions were optional, or if the punishments were something fun but not really harmful like becoming a woman for a day, all food tastes bad for a week, itchy and so on. But no, all punishments are absurd at the level that if the mc fails a mission he could very well end up dying or with irreversible/serious long term consequences. I won't drop it as it's all very well written and interesting, but I won't improve my grade as long as the mc remains a slave either.

LV 4

MYTH_

I wish I could give this Fan-Fic more than 5 stars but I am unable to do that. All I can do is thank you author for sharing this unusually wonderful Fiction with us readers.

LV 4

Nyxio

Stop these punishments...Author if you didn't know, we readers like to relate to the MC which we read and we feel highly uncomfortable and stressed when such a system is given to MC. Most of us would leave at this point like I am now. Goodluck! I hope your next book will have more sense because this book seems hopeless and NOT funny at ALL.

LV 6

Timelesstrix

Pretty decent character interactions that the MC has with the other anime cast... the MC's situation is very generic as a system slave...As summary says, MC is completely reliant on system from what i've seen so far

LV 15

Reaper_X_7998

GIVE ME MOAR CHAPTERS MOAR..................................................................................................................

LV 13

0Zagreus0

Death to Sorata.💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💣💣💣💣💣💣💣💣💣💣💣💣💣💣💣💣💣💣💣💣

LV 3

7350Ledger

ahhhhh i fuc*ing love this fanfic....... mc is embodiment of 'if i am going to suffer your also going to suffer'...... and comedy is top notch 🤣🤣🤣..

LV 3

mikatamo1

The story is interesting and funny in about the first 60 chapters but as recently your story has become more and more boring as it started to become like those trash Chinese MC from the china novel, especially after the MC goes to Tensura as he acts no different to those Chinese MC trash and become more and more stupid as he tries to get benefit from Leon Cromwell the demon lord that can literally kill him anytime and the so call demon lord is also too soft to the point is looking like his IQ is below the average of someone as the demon lord like him should have

LV 3

Heavenly_Demon13

Plz don't harem. .. No harem. .. No harem. .. No harem. ... No harem... .no harem.. .. No harem. .. .No harem. .. .. No harem. ... No. Harem.

LV 1

Aizen_81

Pros: Very good comedy. Very good hero character. The dialogues are wonderful and enjoyable and get a full mark. The negatives: a hero, despite his good personality in dialogues, but he grumbles a lot within himself and he is unstable at all. I would have preferred to be smart and adapt instead of complaining. Very slow progress, but I think he would be perfect with a smart and emotionally stable character, so he will get through minor problems without worrying about him as a viewer who only waits for the moment of his downfall because he is a coward I will say that he is incompetent instead of a coward

LV 4

MissPinkElf

well I don't know about the others but I think it's a new idea so I'm giving it a 5 star, and the grammar is good for me so I recommend this book

LV 4

Dasksd2

it's a good story and but the mc doesn't fail at nothing every time he gets a quest he always success with no failure so u should make him where he at leasts fails some of em and start letting characters die or sum fir character development

LV 4

Soryuken

Hey author friendly reviewer here I honestly have to say that I have been going through some hard times lately and novels really brighten my day. Yours has honestly made me feel a sense of joy and appreciation for the wacky inventiveness of Webnovel authors. While most will try to trash talk or belittle your work I find it a reprieve from the everyday depression I’v been facing lately. So thank you for your work and thank you for sharing your vision with us.

LV 2

SAURON_

This made me laugh so hard i thought i was having a panic attack but man was this good very detailed please force him into ATG. but thank you this was a good experience.

LV 4

borbking_chken

haven't laughed at novel this hard in a long time, however I have a question is this a harem, or mini harem cause there are some grade A waifus

LV 1

greedy_reader17

AMAZING

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Luis121

I AM IN NEED OF SOME MORE OF THIS! I like the way this story is going. Keep it up! 👍MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE

LV 3

7350Ledger

this fanfic is amazing ......... the mc is embodiment of 'if i am going to suffer you're also going to suffer with me......... and the interaction between Yuki,ashiya and maou is interesting and absolutely funny 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣.....

LV 5

Goldenswiftreader

Slice of life, extreme system, an almost likeable mc who's a bit crazy, and the mixing of a few different "average life" series create for an interesting series. Could do with a brush up on the grammar, but otherwise a fun read, thank you.

LV 1

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