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Good I like how the story is and keep up the good work.......👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
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I'm enjoying this story, it's very much for my taste, I hope you keep doing your great job Autor-san! Thank you for this fanfiction! .
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Your the best around, Nothing gonna ever keep you down. Your the best around, Nothing gonna ever keep you down. Your the best around, Nothing gonna ever keep you down.
Continue the story I would like to see how interesting it is going to be. Still the first story was very good you could've continued it........
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Very interesting , Please continue and write more chapters .............................................................................................
Finally!A satisfying Fan-fic , Even I think that Naruto is clearly brainwashed by Third. Not to mention he never really reached his full potential ,Even during the Timeskip between Naruto and shippuden , all he mastered were shadow clone and Rasengan. He got the brute force of his upgraded again and again. Uzumaki Chakra+ Senjutsu chakra+ Nine tails chakra + Sos paths chakra . All of these made his chakra potent and lethal. Not to mention he never really realised he was brainwashed about the village even after he learnt who his parents were. And I read your Fan-fic about Sasuke and yeah , I too share the same view , Though I also have other idea like I always wondered what would happen if Sasuke completely forgot about Itachi.
This is my first fanfic. I am writing this for fun. Hope you all like it. And I will try by best to update more frequently. And give a review or tips to better this story.