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My Forever with you

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作者: akshaya_vanne

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"Life is the flower for which love is the honey"
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" Its feels so nice under the sky, hey look.. there are so many star's in the sky"she said pointing at the stars

"But i'm more interested in my moon" he said looking at her.
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Elena's life has always been limited to herself, completing her studies she wanted work for fulfilling her dreams. Being the only child she was always pampered by her parents. Under their guides she never knew of the outside world. she wanted to experience every thing from love to life.

Lucas Thomson, known for his playboy image never wanted to have a serious relationship. He treated women like piece of cloth, changing after having fun with them. The only heir of PM Enterprises, he had everything from good looks to money.

But what will happen when he starts getting attracted to a girl who have never had any experience in love?
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"Wh- what do you want? " she said stammering.

"Your heart"he said looking at her intently.

" why? "she said looking in his eyes.

" Because i want it to beat for me as my beats for you... " taking her hand he place it on his heart for her to listen.
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Come join me with the journey of Lucas and Elena from how they fall in love and experience new turns in their lives.


P. S: This cover doesn't belong to me credit to the respected owner.

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    akshaya_vanne

    Shameless author reviewing her own book😂😂. This is my first attempt to write a book, the story have been in my mind a long time just made an attempt to write my imaginary stuff into words. Give it a try and you will not be disappointed 🙏

    3yr
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    Isybebe

    Sooo i have to make another review 😭😭seriously this book is good,funny and lovely .I don’t regret my choice😍🔥,i really recommend this book

    3yr
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    poo_adhav

    Such a lovely book.My first ever time initiating to read a novel.Nicely written,loved the development about the plot.Good work author keep it up

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    Seng_M
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    I’m really excited to read this book and afraid at the same time.. I can’t handle if the story is very emotional. Is the MC will die??? The tag shows TRAGEDY so I’m really curious of the ending. PLEASE make a happy Ending. I don’t want neither fl or ml to be dead.

    2yr
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    Meemarh_08

    💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕 I'm loving this story ,it's very interesting keep it up 👍😂🖤

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    Li_Yi_Wei

    Writing quality is a bit below with either grammar, sentence structure, or spelling/vocab issues however overall good story; the writing sometimes breaks the flow tho but usually I just rewrite it in my head Recommend either going back and self edit or getting an editor (could have sworn Webnovel gives contract authors editors tho)

    2yr
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    santosh_gaikwad

    Loved the book.Very nicely written, with each character development. ML and FL are cute couple.Very nice story and well explained emotion.The ML is so funny yet scary at same time[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

    3yr
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    Rena_Gindi

    Interesting story[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

    3yr
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    shweta_gaikwad_2565

    Lovely book started it reading now and I'm already loving.ML is cool and funny with his witty character.The FL is strong and slow to get ML words.Overall the book is funny,has emotions and is totally fresh.Can't stop reading it❤️❤️❤️

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    3yr
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    yashmello

    I read the first chapter and let me tell you,the book is really interesting. All the character has their own flaws and the couple is too funny especially the ML. Author has written very well.The story is fun to read and You will feel every character emotions.

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    Varshugawk27

    This book came into recommendation and trust the book is just fun to read😘😘😘The ML and FL are just to cute to handle. The ML has my ❤Author has done a nice work. The story is fresh and the plot is nice. Going to stick till end

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    srestitha

    I really like this book a lot and fell in love with it everything in this book is awesome ml and fl are perfect 🥰💞👌❤😍 hope we'll get more amazing updates in this beautiful journey not only the story but we can learn so many things from this amazing book🤍

    3yr
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    Isybebe

    I like all in this book . I preferred to read fantasy romance than contemporary romance this is the first i loved😍.I really love the characters of the ML lucas Continued like that author 🥂good job

    3yr
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    Q_elleson

    This story is very interesting and captivating, character development is very good with both leads well portrayed. Some delusional people will try and break the MC's apart because of the past of the ml. I can't wait for the drama to continue 🤠🤠 well done author 👍

    3yr
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    Vaishupjv

    Justbcame across this one book, it felt amazing to Read Lucas is funny hand poor his assistant. Felam lead is a reserved person who tales time to open. can't wait to read more👌👌👌👌

    3yr
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    Avivan12

    First thank you for bringing a fresh story with interesting plot.Secondly the author have improved a lot with the writing skill. Now what I like about the story is the lead couple. The book is a slow burn romance😊😊😊plus the ML is a funny man with scary personality. But is like a cute kitten when with FL. Can't wait to read more of it Nd to know how the story develops 👌👌👌

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