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MY FIRST

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作者: oyslyness

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(p.s cover's not mine. Credit to the artist.)

Summer Hathaway is your typical eighteen year old.

She has a perfect family, a crazy best friend.

And of course, a secret that let's her believe she doesn't deserve any good happening to her.

Well, until Jaxon Prinston arrives.

He makes her experience things she didn't know she could experience.

Makes her know that a secret couldn't rule or dictate her life.

That's one of the many reasons why he's her first ;)

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    Yvette_Celia

    i have read the few first chapters and trust me. this is such a great work and i love it. i will continue read it till the end. keep writing author...

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    SkyEmpress

    Aww this story is kinda cute uwu The characters are nicely introduced and we get front-row seats in the main character's love story. It may seem like a typical romance novel, but come on, who doesn't like cute love stories?

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    Akira_Monadelle

    I was easily pulled in by the synopsis. I'm a sucker for teen romance lol, I always find them very cute especially when the guy is nice. The story successfully avoided being cliche and was actually quite unique in comparison to the other teen romance novels I've read. The novel is written in the present tense which I found quite strange since novels are originally written in the past tense. I personally prefer when authors use the show and not tell method but the author managed the diary method quite well. There were little to no grammatical errors making this a very easy and understandable read. Overall, the novel has a lot of potential and is a fun and sweet read regardless. [img=recommend]

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    Silver72

    I believe that this is a contemporary romance not to sure on that tis isn't exactly my genre of books but i thought that it would be nice to give it a shoot. i can positively say that the characters are really well done i don't know if it's generic as this isn't my main reading genre but what i can say is that i want to get to know the characters more. the mc Summer seems really nice and she has real human emotions like feeling nervous and stuttering a little when she's nervous which is a small thing that really brings her to life and makes her feel like i was when i was a teen and talked to a girl i liked for the first time. For a first in read in the romance genre it hook me and i enjoy it and i look forward to reading more of this story. keep it up Author-kun

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    veronica_nunoo

    Love it but it was a bit similar to the other story Cloven but I loved it. Hope to see the updates soon❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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    Heart_Made

    Great story well written and thought out. i will use my special pass to unlock chapters. keep up the good work its such a sweet real story that many people will relate to

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