/ Fantasy / My Daemon System
概要
In a mystical realm where humans are blessed with a unique connection to their inner selves, a wondrous fantasy world exists. Every individual is born with a Daemon, a magnificent creature believed to be the embodiment of their very soul. As they reach the age of maturity, the Daemon settles into a specific form, granting its human host a remarkable ability.
However, amidst this extraordinary reality, there exists a young boy named Jacob who has faced a fate different from his peers. From the day of his birth, he was marked as different, for he was born without a Daemon. This peculiarity made him the target of relentless bullying and scorn from those who couldn't understand his absence.
Enduring the constant torment, Jacob harbored a hidden strength, an indomitable spirit that refused to be crushed by the weight of his loneliness. One fateful day, as he found himself cornered once again by his tormentors, a wave of determination surged within him. No longer willing to be a victim, he unleashed an extraordinary ability, a power that surged through his veins.
To his astonishment, he discovered that he possessed a system—a mysterious force guiding him through the trials and tribulations of his world. It presented him with quests, and challenges that tested his courage, resilience, and wit. Each quest completed bestowed upon him new skills and abilities, transforming him into a formidable force to be reckoned with.
Jacob's journey took him across vast and enchanting landscapes, where he encountered strange creatures, forged unlikely alliances, and unraveled the secrets of his world. With every quest conquered, he grew stronger, both in body and in spirit, shedding the weight of his past suffering.
Yet, as his powers expanded and his reputation grew, the system presented him with a quest that filled him with doubt and trepidation.
"It is time for war".
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Bro your book is amazing, but I this k you should change the book cover, to attract more people, because it kinda sad not seeing this book get the attention it deserves
The plot is interesting! Writing style is awesome! Chapter's are too less author, upload more! (was trying to rhyme but failed miserably )
This is not bad, the story is promising not gonna lie, it's good. It may be a bit early to write a review but am not a picky reader. please write more chapters.
Men! thank God it was a dream 😂😂 Hikes! Your writing is top notch, expressing in simple words that are easy to understand. The book all good. Must say Jacob is really a tough one. Good luck in your book. This book is going to reach great heights.
Dive into a realm of boundless imagination and exhilarating action with this remarkable fantasy novel that boasts a world-building prowess beyond compare. From the very first page, I was captivated because the novel is so well-written, keep up the good work!
The story is interesting, but somehow there are some paragraphs that seem too short, and there are some sentences that are repeated. Maybe adding details and reducing repetitive sentences will make the story much more interesting. Keep up the good work author!
Looks like I need to change my review, so yeah, here's a new review, [1] Writing quality » Awesome, the author has a large and diverse vocabulary and provides a detailed Description. 5stars. [2] Story Development » It's still in the growth stage, but I have high hopes. 4stars. [3] Character Design » Growth phase, but up until now, he is definitely not a wuss and can talk normally to others, {Not like those dumb MCs who bite their tongue while talking}. 4 stars. [4] Updating stability » 11 chaps a week what else do you want? 5 stars. [5] World Background » A little different, { In the past, there were some alien species waging war against humanity, but later they patch up, and the government doesn't want the same shii to happen again, so a military school type thing was created to train students.} 4 stars. Now what I did not like. First, the conversation sometimes feels unnatural. So does the MC, not always but sometimes. And I guess that's it. If I find any mistakes in the future then I'll make sure to point them out.
An intriguing read with great writing skills, a really nice job done. A read I'll totally recommend
I will give a short review.Overall everything is OK.after reading 5 chapters. there is a point made me thinking.about stat and skill. the author really hard work for that because I think it's not easy like-----------------Attack : 50Defense: 25Speed: 30etcI guess it's hard to make and hard to memories them. Great Job bro
I really like the descriptions of character’s emotions and the plot is capturing me so far. The only negative criticism I could give you, would be to re-edit your chapters to make sure there isn’t any unfinished sentences or mistakes.💯
this is really confusing sometimes I wonder who the main character is is it Adam or Jacob also some point the story changes entirely I don't understand what's happening the characters are really confusing and its just world background is confusing and everything about Adam is just weird story makes almost no sense I mean most of the characters I don't understand what is going on with them
woah, the novel is amazing, I can almost feel the tension on the battleground, thought it was real😂🤣. Jacob's persistence is what we need in the world, the book is amazing, keep the chapters coming
Regressor Mc, system, deamon, expansive world building and great action. Plenty of room fro great development the only problem is the updates!! upload more author!!
suuch a fire book cant wait for more good plot fire chapter 1 to 2 i hope for more chapter cause it realy was good i reccomend this book!! i hope others would enjoy reading................................ lez go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Story line is really nice. And I'm already falling in love with this story. Great work author😊😊
Nice plot, i like it i really like the writing style, but i want each chapter to be longer tho
It's an interesting concept with cool aspects and elements. I think you should work on the length of the chapters. Grammar is element you could work on as well. Great stuff though. Hope to see more.
To begin with the story is interesting it's like you get curious to know more and turn pages to read further by way great work.
Its nice to see another author from Nigeria here, hay check out my novel.