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He wants an average life!
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Not many chapter but based on the those few chapters I read... The story is progressing quite good. This novel has a lot of potential. I am going to add this novel in the library. Hope it won' t disappoint
The story itself is great, but there a couple things you could fix in the story. First of all the story shifts from actuall story to side story. Many readers, like me, would get very confused and wouldn't be able to follow the main story so in order to avoid that I suggest to work on the main story first and write about 1-4 chapters of the main story or how many chapters it takes to have a decent ending then start on the side story's for about 1-2 chapters ending at a suspenseful but not too suspenseful ending and then repeat the pattern. And second of all the p. O. W sounds a bit off. The character would sound better if it didn't directly speak to us, the readers, like an aside.
OK, so this novel is pretty good but the problem to me is that it's hard for you to keep track which character is who and who is talking and so on. Other than that the plot and the character development is pretty good. Its basically that one typical plot where "Oh, I want a average life like a normal person, then a pretty girl come out of no where and you save her and boom, you are no longer a average person!" Well that's my summary. Enjoy the book! Cheers!
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only up to chapter 8 and what can i say? It is very average, get it XD? Well that is really all i got. If you read this it is a good pass time, for some in there genre of romance and the schoolboy type it might even be a favourite read? Other than that, nothing really to say for now i guess?
The premise of the story seems interesting. But the lack of an update schedule, combined with the author's student status, makes it seem like the story will not progress anytime soon.
About the 5 chapters that are out at the moment. Very interesting story so far - it has a lot of potential. Looking forward to how the story will develop. Keep it up Mr. Author.
Pretty much average, sure its good writing and all, but it just lack something to make people keep reading. Other than that its decently written and almost mediocre.
Waiting for more chapters already. gimme more. but seriously... i want to read like 50 chapters in one go. now i need to feel word quota. turururu.
keep going! I hope you can post it I hope you can post it I hope you can post it I hope you can post it I hope you can post it I do not have 140 words to tell you so I wrote "I hope you can post it " five times :)
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i give u 5 star!!! cause i like ur cover XD hehehehehehehehehehehehe...... =.=" 140 characters ssssiiiiiiigggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhh........................!!!
This was actually the very first novel that I read when I downloaded Webnovel, I find this character quite interesting. Sadly, this has not yet updated since then. T.T
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This is a polar topic Kaki hashtag - as I spent one my day. The life of any person is interesting. New meetings, ups and downs, you can meet a tiger and step on its tail ... then life will become even more interesting ... There is another promising short story "My Daily Life" ... it's all curious! Good luck to the authors and new updates!
can you update this story faster than a bullet and don't leave me hanging. it's a good story.update faster so I don't find u and kill u for the cliffhanger
Is the artist for the cover page the same guy who did the one orginally for ** im not over you or something. Geez why does this look so freaking similar to P5 MC.
I feel like reading mystery story,, it’s really good plot story.. reading until this chp 8 Make me feel excited for the next development of the story. Wahhh how average life MC in the future?! Really looking forward.. Really like! 💕 please routine update..
Hey Guys, Author here!! I hope you are enjoying this novel. It's my first novel so mistakes may happen. I hope you can be with till the last chapter. I will do my best to entertain you and stand up to your expectations. Thanks for reading!!