章 28: Boobs or Thighs?
Uh hi?
Lmfao this is awkward but well hello I guess.
I won't give reasons to why I disappeared and stuff since no one really cares do they, the story matters after all, author is secondary (~‾▿‾)~
Now onto the story, It's been a year and I almost forgot this existed sob sob. I actually read through it again and God how tf did I make so many mistakes and still have people saying it was better than 90% of writers here that felt so embarassing.
It's like watching the stupid sand castle you made as a kid thinking it's godly but when an you're an adult you can tell it's shit (ノ｀Д´)ノ彡┻━┻
Half the fanfic is me explaining things that should be clear in the book in comments, that feels like the biggest fail for me.
The first group chat was half-retarded, choosing gosu (80% of people don't know) for his martial art was retarded not to mention not making stuff clear about it (cough the experience cough), the spar was retarded, not knowing how chakra worked was retarded.
Too much retardation honestly.
Everything after that was okay I believe but I still need to fix these things since they're the fundamentals.
And tf was I thinking? Seer? Predictions?
Why am I even making it complicated for myself instead of just saying he has future knowledge as an admin and use that openly for his benefits while helping the group members.
Well, I'll stop crying for now, no point in whining. I still like the story no matter how much I btch about it ¯\_༼ ಥ ‿ ಥ ༽_/¯
Well, you've gotten my gist by now I believe, I really have to fix the first ten chapters, I can't keep on going knowing stupid stuff I've done.
Gonna change quite a few things so I won't recommend re-reading. Just wait for a few weeks.
Also, sorry for disappearing. I did something I didn't think I would. I should've just honestly said something instead of disappearing.
When I fix everything (which will take a few weeks) I'll notify you guys.
To everyone who still liked the book despite its flaws, I love you ( ◜‿◝ )♡
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