It's has some grammatical mistakes but overall i feel that this rating is good for the current State of this novel. I would like to see how this novel is taken forward and the rest of the story taking place. Since, it happens alot that the first 10 chapters are bangers but then, the rest just get pale over time due to the number of times the some troupes (such as - op mc, old characters looking like children, etc) and I am intrigued to see which direction this novel goes.
It's has some grammatical mistakes but overall i feel that this rating is good for the current State of this novel. I would like to see how this novel is taken forward and the rest of the story taking place. Since, it happens alot that the first 10 chapters are bangers but then, the rest just get pale over time due to the number of times the some troupes (such as - op mc, old characters looking like children, etc) and I am intrigued to see which direction this novel goes.