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Mobseka – The World of Otome Games Ain’t That Bad [Waifu Catalog]
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This dating sim may have awful balancing, and a completely nonsensical society that barely manages to avoid total collapse, but I have a massive space battleship. Now if only The Company had stupidity defense as an option. Well, let's just enjoy our second chance while throwing a wrench in to various diabolical plots because I am no mere mob. A Waifu Catalog fanfic based off of Trapped in a Dating Sim: The World of Otome Games is Tough For Mobs.
The originial Story, the cover, and all images used belong to their respective owners. This is my first attempt at writing so I'm very open to constructive criticism
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Another Mobseka fic, god bless this tag(which doesn't exist). Writing quality is good, the latest chapters have minor but negligible mistakes. World building and Plot Dev are very enjoyable, though the author could explain the talents and perks that MC chose because not everyone has the waifu catalog open. The characters aren't OOC, so another plus, but some interactions that OC has are kinda unrealistic I guess. I actually like the SI, but the Pendragon/Ernesti template is overkill for this world in my opinion. 4.0/5.
So far the Writing and Story Development are good Character Design as well however the reason why this is getting a 4.8-star review is I can't understand Leon's powers I know he has a Template Stacking of [Arthur Pendragon (Nasuverse), and Ernesti Echevalier (Knight's & Magic)] but what does that Intel? Does that mean he has their magic output? Their Knowledge and Skills? Also what with all the other stuff that was at the end of Chapter 1 it was just so much of a disorganized mess that I couldn't understand it. That's my only problem just need to organize what he's cheats are but otherwise this is a great read so fair can wait for more.
I hope you continue the story in the same pace,the start as been good especially using ernesti template.I gave 3 stars because there are only 2 chaps,if you post more I think I'll give a five. ❤️
I'm liking this story so far, I like the MC's configuration and I also like your explanations, they help fill in plot holes that would only bring up more questions./esta historia me esta gustando hasta ahora, me gusta la configuración del Mc y también me gusta tus explicaciones, ayudan a llenar agujeros argumentales que solo traerían mas preguntas.(english/español)