Mob in a fantasy novel

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Revireuu

This is my first novel, I'll try my best to make it readable. This novel is somewhat of a demo for me so I probably won't take it too serious. However, if it seems to be going in the right direction and people are generally enjoying it, I'll actually start trying to make something. Otherwise, this novel would just be one of my ideas that I came up with being bored. Anyways enough of my rant, hope you enjoy.

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Aryan_Das_8652

good novel. i think author should continue writing this. it has the potential to become a great novel. there is not much to say. I will write another review after 50 chapters. good luck 😁

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Jeff_Smith_3131

The name of the novel is bad, but so far the novel is good.

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Tenzing_Choeying_5139

Story is very good and has an evil mc who is calm and calculating. The author does a good job of portraying the mc as cunning and smart. I hope the author doesn't drop this story.

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Voidir

From what I've read so far, this novel has a crazy amount of potential. The first few chapters were somewhat cliche, however the story develops into something new and intriguing rather quickly. The MC of this novel is very cunning and analytical. Furthermore, he isn't afraid of change. It's very refreshing to see how the MC does his own thing without caring about changing the plot. Moreover, the power system is also interesting and has potential. I'm looking forward on how you'll progress this novel. Good luck!For people that like smart, manipulative and ruthless MCs, I highly recommend this novel. So far, there hasn't been any romance. From what I've gathered so far, Sorin is somewhat of a sociopath that doesn't really care about others, only his own interests.

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JIm_Lamb

[img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] Enjoying the novel so far, hopefully the author keeps it up. [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]