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MMORPG : Return of the Void Emperor

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作者: Shadowss

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In outer region of sector R,there is a 17-year-old boy screams in joy with tears in his eyes said"hahaha....it worked the watch of Chronos worked". After he controlled his emotion he said, "I have travel back in time before the release of NEXUS, I have time of 3 years before the codex happens". NEXUS is a MMORPG game that is popular in future where a more than quarter of the world population plays the game, it is a place where dreams come true where a poor person can become rich in one night. But what many people don't know is that after 5th year anniversary of NEXUS is when the energy called mana enter into the world and the apocalypse begun.

"I know future events that others have no idea about that gives me the lead, but my path will not be easy. This time i protect my loved ones and stand at the pinnacle of power "he said.Dev doesn't know that this is the beginning of his story.
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Hey guys this is the author of the MMORPG:Return of the Void, this is my first novel and English is not my first language but if there is any error you can comment on and i try to improve the mistakes i make.

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    Creativityiskey

    This is a pretty good book it has good world background and explanations but the only bad thing is the grammer if the author just rereaded his book he would be able to see so I advise them to but I will keep this book in my library overall

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    N3xUs
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    the story is really good its have a great potential to be on ranking and the only downside is the grammar.

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    Brezer
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    not a bad story. you really need to se grammarly or chat gpt to get the grammar correct. the grammar is really the only thing hurting the story right now.

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