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MHA : Light is Everything

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作者: RockSForD

3.88 (10 レビュー結果)

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You've probably heard such words many times, "Good will come back like a boomerang."
Even after your death, it returns. That's what happened to 37-year-old Viktor Bragin.
For his actions, he received an interesting gift in heaven. Rebirth.
Rebirth or "Reincarnation".
In India, it is believed that this will befall everyone after death.
Victor himself did not believe it, but he had heard about it more than once and considered this idea absurd.
Without expecting it, it turned out to be true.

P. S

English is not my language, but I wanted to share my work with you and to get your opinion. There will be mistakes, that's for sure, so I'm sorry in advance.

I also want to say that this is an unusual excised fanfic, but it is different in general. There will be no strong deviations from the canon.

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Z6R1A
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This is a fun story to read. I really like the idea of starting the story a long way back before the canon starts. This story is also constantly uploading which is really noice!

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RaydenDarkus

This is MHA, not One Piece. Something like the Rokushiki shouldn't even exist. He is already overpowered. How much more will you provide to his abilities !! He is already the foookin strongest

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VILLIAN_MAKER

Bro, you seriously need a editor. I mean it. if you want, you can contact me to help you with it and yes , please put some spaces/dash in between.

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Frad
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Impossible to read Look into getting an editor or using grammarly Idk why thats so hard for most people on this site. i wont read this again until it has better grammar

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Edsil_boysillo

this need more chapter wahhahahha i need more thankyou......... more!! more! more!! more!! more!! more!! more!! more!! more!! more!! more!! more!!

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DreamzWork

this good so far 😌 👌. .

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kainraziel245

i relly like this story i Hope It Will resume sone

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Adawhite

I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *).

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Raven_Crowley

A new take on MHA fanfic with not starting as a kid and studying heroics. The premise is good and the path is promising. I just read the first chapter, but I couldn't stand the grammar, so for now I will only rate it 3 star. I hope the author will find a good editor since the story has huge potential. I will come back and rate it higher once this story is edited well. Cheers!

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leoreview1

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

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  • テキストの品質
  • アップデートの安定性
  • ストーリー展開
  • キャラクターデザイン
  • 世界の背景

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