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Traveling back to the Yahiko period within the Akatsuki organization, Byakuya initially sought to escape swiftly to avoid becoming a victim of the rise of Pain. However, he unintentionally acquired a system bound to the Akatsuki organization. This system offered rewards as long as the Akatsuki organization grew and developed.
To prevent the Akatsuki organization from being obliterated, Byakuya had to take charge of guiding its development, steering it onto a completely different trajectory.
When Hanzo and Danzo joined forces to crush the Akatsuki organization, they were astonished to discover its newfound strength, capable of challenging even the Hidden Rain Village.
Many years later, the five major ninja nations were taken aback to find that the Akatsuki organization had quietly subverted the entire ninja world, emerging as the uncrowned king of the shinobi realm. All of this was thanks to the man concealed deep within the Akatsuki organization.
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I don’t own anything in the novel and English isn’t my primary language. I could rely on feedback to improve myself.
Don't ask about Harem since even I don't know yet. Romance would be decided for later.
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I read up to chapter 90, and I think the worst thing about this fic is the lack of personality of the MC. Japanese fanfics have this flaw; I don't know why. They create a fanfic with immense potential, plan various scenarios within the fic to make a cool conclusion, but the personality, which is the main aspect, is lacking. And I'm not just talking about this fic; most of the ones I read in MTL are like this. They make the protagonist's dialogue sarcastic. I'll cite an example from one of the chapters I took: "It is senior. Just like Hanzo-sensei, Danzo-senpai is also someone I respect. Danzo-senpai also provided many plans to seize power and helped me become the leader of the Akatsuki organization. He was a friendly and good senior. He ran very fast when we last met, otherwise, I would still like to reminisce with him. After all, he ran away too quickly." Without him, I probably wouldn't be the leader of the Akatsuki organization now." (Yes, this was supposed to be sarcasm from the MC right after Danzo tried to kill him in an ambush, which logically failed.) So I don't need to say much; in terms of personality, the MC is very lacking. He has no motivation to become stronger, no real connection with other characters, and no one he romantically likes. It seems like he only lives for his system. If it weren't for the poor development of the MC, this fic could be first-rate because the details are very good. If the author who is translating would change and create a new fic based on this one, adding more details and better dialogues, it could be better.
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this looks like starting of one of the best naruto. The translation is quite good, tho a sprinkle of chatgpt shows here and there. the chinese jokes have been changed to english jokes which is very well done. The MC believes in mental manipulation and if he was in harry potter verse then he would have surely given dumbdumbdore a run for his greater good. Now we see how he handles naruto world. Give it a try...
The story is good but could you provide the name of the original fanfic as I have already read this.
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A nice concept with potential, we see stuff from pov of some of the major antagonist of naruto and how the mc changes that. To much useless words added from gpt but overall pace is good
This is good fanfic and worth reading ...........................................................................................................................
read the book on fanmtl but the translation was bad glad you took the book and made it readable, xiaonan and other chinese name made me drop it at fanmtl
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Not a bad story, but the heavily usage of chat GPT to add more words makes the novel very hard and boring to read...you are a writer bro, just write, idk why are so many "authors" afraid of writing...