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Waking up in a world with demon's able to make systems to gain power was a trippy way to know that after death your soul just shuttles through the Omniverse trying to find a body but taking over one of those said demon's was a nice cherry on-top.
now what's with all the talks about a green monster wrecking havoc in these world's and even a man wearing iro—Wait?!? am I in marvel?!? FUCK!
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first of all horrible writing When he spells awesome as owesome , titles as tittles and suprise as suprias basically a lot of typos, wrong words and missing words the fact that he has been writing this for nearly a month and there's no signs of improvement its not good the mc is the 7th place on the test why would the clan just allow him to leave when he is an asset like bruh he got abducted by the clan then they just let him leave when he has talent come on man atleast make it reasonable and another thing the demon body is getting sidelined sure using the human body is good and all but you havent even develop the main body properly like he just awakened his bloodline thsn abandoned it focusing on the human
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This story as a huge potential please don't drop to fill words to fill words to fill words to fill words to fill words to fill words to fill words to fill words to fill words
Not bad at all, some things the mc does is questionable, like releasing a system with no control over it, no matter how low the level, out into the world. I don’t know what kind of trouble that thing is gonna cause eventually, but besides that this aint a bad read. It has plenty of potential👍
okay so i enjoyed the first few chapters. .....but now that the author is adding clone after clone for the mc, I get confuse sometimes that which pov the author is writing.....i think the author himself don't understand what he is writing..... just don't too much clone and forget about the main body,it's good to have a human body and all that but u also have to focus on the main body......the title is system maker but he is using system made by someone else....
GREAT FANFIC. I REALLY WANT TO SEE HOW THE SYSTEM HE GAVE ARE BEING USED(MORE OF A STORY IN LESS THAN 2 CHAPTERS). LET'S GO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
most 5 star rates are botted accounts this novel is a dumpster fire of an excuse of a novel
The greatest systemic novel I have ever read. I highly recommend you read this. ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I love it always wanted to see a good system maker ff pls dont drop this. Hidden Gem⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I am really liking the story, I found the world setting interesting, please, do continue publishing new chapters
Very good. I love stories like this where the MC create things ( I don't know how to say it) so this got me hooked instantly. Continue, I hope you won't drop it, that would make me really sad, and I don't like being sad.
Would be 15x better if MC was morally grey instead of pitch black edgelord catering evil. Good world building. Subpar grammar, though I am only 28 or so chapters in. Overall story is decent.
It's too good .🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 Bnmmb Gjmmnvvvvvvvvvvvvv Vvn kmvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvccvvxcvvcxcvvxxcvvcxccvvvxcvvcxccc Afaggaggagaggagahagaggagagagagaggagagagagagaggagagagaggagagagaggagagagagaggagagaggagagagagaggagsgagaggagzgsgaggagagahaggagagagaggagagagaggsgsgagagsggagsgzgag
I’m seeing HUGE potential from this book and this definitely has the potential to top the fanficition charts on the app. Only problem I see is I see a lot of unfinished stories on authors profile and I pray to every god I know you do not drop this future masterpiece. 5000/5 so far keep up the great work king!!!! 👑 💪