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概要
The summer night passed through and passed through the world of Marvel movies!
“But, it appears directly on the battlefield of the bullets, what is the start?”
“And why is my golden finger a decomposition machine in DNF?”
[Decomposition equipment is successful! 】
[Advanced sniper shooting experience *100]
[Decomposition equipment is successful! 】
[Advanced Fighting Techniques Experience *100]
[Decomposition equipment is successful! 】
[A dazzling battle of souls, can enhance the strength of body attributes! 】
“Can it be better than God?”
[That is just the starting point! 】
“then continue to break down!”
[Decomposition equipment is successful! 】
[Cannot look directly at the exercise *100]
“…”
( Note :-
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YO!! Bro here is your brother DL i will add
daily @ chapter for you..
{starting from date 27-4-2020} )
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I liked what I read except for the one fact that the grammar sucks. I've seen kids write better. I like the concept, I really do but I can't read this man.
I only read the first chapter, but it is impossible to read anything here, you should get an alpha, a beta, and an omega before you use an mtl and post it as your story.
hello! everyone i try to fix some grammar mistake. that all of you facing so far in earlier chapters hope you all like it new update __(^-^)__ note : this not my work i add this novel for everyone enjoy it ..
Very bad grammar........................................,...........................................................................................
for GOD sake use google translate. ................................................................................................................................................................................
Wow the stability is 1 chapter per day!! That’s awesome, 5 ⭐️ for update stability! Too bad I can’t read it.... Can’t really give a good review because the grammar is honestly awful. The writing quality brought down the whole thing. I read the whole first chapter and I lost all motivation in reading. Well, It’s written in English but it felt like Math. You have to add 1 and 1 together but instead of getting the obvious answer of 2, your answer would be undefined. No use trying if in the end, you still won’t understand anything.
I don't understand why everyone is giving this a 5 star rating. I mean the grammar is terrible..most of the time i cannot even understand what is going on. Don't bother wasting your time reading this....I'm out.
I saw people complaining about grammar and I thought they were just trying to drag another author down but I actually cant read this please fix thus so it makes sense.
Make the MC Master of All Things- Magic(Rune, Wizardry, Cosmic energy or other energy and Sorcerer)-Already a sorcerer though, Martial Artist(Chi and Many more arts), Science(Scientist, Engineer or many more)- By making him every mastery beyond the level we can imagine step by step. Also make the appereance of Comic charaters more like Shang Chi and many more Asian Characters, Make mutants into meta-humans with story. Hope to see those soon.
Can anyone understand anything that is written because I don't know what's going on. Author please touch up on your English as it makes no sense.
It doesn't matter to me if it's tailgates or not but since you introduced it to the webnovel you deserve 5stars. Hope that you continue posting it so that I don't have to find it somewhere else.