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After Travelling To Marvel World SJ (Sam Jackson) Got 10000 Multiplier System which he can strengthen anything that is nonliving, From That Day he started his journey to win the universe.
"Ding - it is detected that host has defected lizard serum, Strengthen It Or Not?"
SJ- yes
'Ding- congrats hosts for getting 10000 times multiplied lizard serum "Ancient dragon immortality formula"
Level- Multiverse level.
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[The story is slow so if you comment while reading a few chapters, you will only mislead other people. please, wait for updates.
Mc is not an idiot, the story is just slow to reveal relevant details.]
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I like the concept but the quality is a little to painful to read. i feel like this has potential to become better. there are some sayings in this that i dont know which makes it a little bit harder to understand. the last issue i stated is probably more on me.
It is too difficult to understand the grammar. All i see is nonsense, I dont see where you have the gall to rate this with five stars. .
I mean in the chapter 15 mc should not give his toys to others like to her Kate.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
this is just unreadable for me. who knows, you may enjoy it. I certainly don't. . . . . .
The way it's currently written is unreadable to me. Once edited I would say it can jump up to a 3/5 but for now, it's stuck at 2/5 simply because it's updated frequently as of now.
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First things first, the grammar is lacking as to why is unknown but that could be better. Secondly, the MC is quite honestly logically impaired. He has neither brain nor common sense and it hurts really. Why would he give away a weapon to someone that knows about his secret and could really bring him into trouble if anyone finds her. Either hide her or kill her, only logical way he should have done. Thirdly, the fact that he just doesn't question any of the behavior is weird. I mean, I get that they try to get to seduce him because he "apparently" looks better but that they would do it so openly would make no sense. He also just doesn't question all of these nonesense and just brainlessly accepts it is truly baffling. The idea of the novel is good, however the application of said idea as a novel is disappointing and just too emotionally led by stupidity. Could be better with better writing quality and better ideas than just naked woman and kill.
Idk if it is mtl or not because it is horrible I recommend Grammarly but I like the idea.
Even though it is dropped, I was curious so I picked it up. It has verrrrry bad grammer, Either the author is translating or his writing skills are purely bad because he uses wrong words often like “old thing” instead of “old man”. There are many such examples. The writing sounds chinese and many decisions and reactions of MC don’t make sense. The world building is weak and many things are not explained or described properly. Basically story is kinda rushed.
just read it until the end, then you guys can give a review about this, for me, personally who's like OP MC, this story has so much potential for the mc to become OP in fast paced, but now the story is dropped 😭
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Tbh he could just bunge but ginseng and upgrade them and get mad abilities without interfering with the plot like he did to get holy body and he can steal some aks and other guns upgrade them and he would get op quickly.
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Tem muito potencial, mas o MC é horrível, é burro, covarde e não tem nenhuma criatividade. Primeiro pq caralhos ele n comeu o ginseng da fenix, pra q ir atrás do soro se ele só precisa fortalecer a água ao grau divino? Sem falar q ele foge das mulheres ele é uma desgraça pra toda a sociedade masculina
Querido autor por favor volte a trabalhar nesse livro porque eu realmente estava gostando muito dele por mas que eu odeie o MC por seu QI desligado! Se poder voltar a escrever e atualizar o QI do MC eu ficarei muito feliz! 😁😁😁😁
why it is stopped i was enjoying it....waawawawawawawawaw .. i agree grammar was not that good.. but it was still better than those MTL ones.... plus the concept... i am finding some other fanfics with same concept but was unsuccessful ............any one tell me if you all know something like this
Can you please write the next chapter...................................................................... .......................................
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Legal personagem op. Que pode resolver qualquer problema sem drama, mas o que limitou foi a falta de objetivo do autor até que ele desistiu da história.
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the application of concept is good. I hope it brings new things to the story. the only problem is grammar but that can be improved with time. expecting a lot ( of chapters) from you author-san.