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After death, Bruce comes back to life again. But It is not the same world. Why did this happen? How is he going to live his new life? Is he going to fight crime again as a vigilante? or something more?
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This is my 1st fanfic and English is not my 1st language. Please give me suggestions. Every comment is valuable.
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I like it, but there are some things about it that I didn't like. I don't like how his personality changed. Batman's personality is what made him batman, he was cold and rarely shows emotions. Now if it was a little watered down from the transmigration then I get it, but you took it all away. I also dislike how you skipped some inportsbr parts that should've been showed. such as his TRAINING, this would of been an awesome insert to the story and show us how batman trains to get his body back in shape and his muscle memory to where it was. Then we have his first fight which was highly disappointing, "I threw a smoke grenade and got rid of 9 of them in less than a minute" ????? like bro, its batman, the best hand-to-hand fighter that there was and you don't include his moves or none of the takedowns!?! I've read more about technology, his schooling, his ideas for Wayne company, then I have fights, training, and actual detective work. Batman didn't always use his AI to do everything. He is not Ironman who has to rely on Jarvis for most of his daily life. Bruce Wayne is a bonafide detective, from finding clues that nobody would think of, could tell someone was lying with a glance, to many other things. I know this is more of a rant than actually help to how to better the story but I feel you could a lot with this which is why I was expecting that.
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You should change the title to "Batman in Marvel ", people will search for Batman rather than Bruce. There is already Bruce Banner in marvel.
This is a really good story. Loving it. Too much potential. I know i will get dissagrement . But the no kill rule is sad. Batman has killed people in the comics and in the movies although it is not shown, the injuries and dropping people from building would kill them. I hate when peole says batman doesn't kill. He has killed in the comics.
it is good i like it just make sure you stay constant in you updates thank you \\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\
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The story has a good potential. Keep up the good work author!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
too bad no updates 😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞
Please don't quit... While rough in some areas, this is the most realistic batman transmigration into marvel I have ever seen. it's very enjoyable and a very worthy read.
Very cool. It's a shame that the update rate is very slow. The author, keep writing, you do it very well and efficiently. Sorry for any possible mistakes - Google translator.
I've just read 1st chapter, well there is only one chapter right now but I'm hooked. Story have serious potential, if the author just writes what batman actually would do in this kind of situation(instead of wish fulfillment) then this story is gonna hit the top. I swear all the above in the name of everything that exists between the heaven and the earth.