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This is a fanfiction of how a martial arts fanatic is chosen as the successor of Supreme Being. And how he will pursue his dream of reaching the peak of martial arts.
Disclaimer: This is a fanfic, so don't bullshit me with copyrights.
Disclaimer: No Harem, No System, No NTR
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Trash pile. The ENTIRE story so far has been him power leveling himself and jumping to a new world. In the first world the only thing that happened is him training, beating japans number 5, then beating the champion, then training, then beating the world champion, then marrying shigure, then dying of old age. LITERALLY nothing happened between that and that's almost exactly how the author wrote it. It took like 10 chapters. Then the bnha world... He did the exact same thing and trained until the UA test, passed the test, skip to the villain attack, defeat the villains, then go on vacation and kill every villain in the world off screen. Just like above, those are the only things the author wrote about. Happened in 10 chapters with nothing in between. Not a single bit of plot or struggle has happened and now the author has to rely entirely on the one piece plot to keep him from making the mc jump to another world in 10 chapters. He's just using luffy as a ball and chain to slow the mc down. Not good at all... He trains the strawhats starting at the fish man island arc an all of them magically learned haki in one day. He's their babysitter now and the author cant deny it. He's as strong as the strongest yonko commanders and trains the strawhats and defeats anyone that comes close to their ship instead of fighting strong people and improving his martial arts like he claims he wants.
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Dropped this trash ff is getting worse. Mc is so friendly and likes to show off his useless strength. Author even planning on making mc join straw hats. Haixt. Reading mtl one piece ff is better than reading this trash. Dissapointing.. Only the first arc is better. But the problem is author likes to make the mc show off to other important characters that you will just get annoyed by how friendly he is. You should just dropped this. Mc is so friendly that makes readers want to punch you .
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After thinking about It I've decided to write a review because I'm certain the author doesn't understand what he's writing about. For example, during the intro arc the mc does this whole training regime and what not only to then cheat using weights. It frustrated me so much I stop reading there.
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I NEED MOAR GOD DAMN IT MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR
A great story, if it had 300 chapters of the same length and quality i would spend a few days just reading this. Hope this story doesn't get dropped.
Great novel please continue writing ░▄▀▄▀▀▀▀▄▀▄░░░░░░░░░ ░█░░░░░░░░▀▄░░░░░░▄░ █░░▀░░▀░░░░░▀▄▄░░█░█ █░▄░█▀░▄░░░░░░░▀▀░░█ █░░▀▀▀▀░░░░░░░░░░░░█ █░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░█ █░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░█ ░█░░▄▄░░▄▄▄▄░░▄▄░░█░ ░█░▄▀█░▄▀░░█░▄▀█░▄▀░ ░░▀░░░▀░░░░░▀░░░▀░░░
u can expect me to read everyday keep up the good work just wish there were more chapters to read ..... :) as the story is in the early stages how about mass release
It should be a great novel in the coming weeks.... There are very few spots related fanfics and that too of boxing... I hope great things mr author....
Great novel, man. Keep up the good work. Mind telling me what is the update rate for this novel is? Also I notice you created a patreon, but that it is empty with no content. (should put an announcement that you have a patreon in a chapter to let people know also) Will becoming a patreon give access to extra chaps or anything? Love to know if becoming one has another extra perks or help you release chapters faster or more.
Don't drop, this is amazing. DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP
A great story btw. Keep up the good work author. 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊👍👍😊👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😊👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊👍👍👍😊
This is one of the best Novels I have ever read on this site. Keep writing please...... It's so hard to find a good martial art fan fiction because they always wish for instant mastery or stuff like that so it gets boring... I'm fine with fast mastery like a prodigy but instant? No I can't stand instant mastery, so your novel is a God send.
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
It's a nice fanfics and I hope you dont drop it because every good fanfic is being dropped by authors. Although I didnt get why he went into Mha as he had all the knowledge of the martial arts from that wish. But the main thing is that I like it and I'd read it further
I really like the way you write this book. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😊😊😊😊😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😁😍😁😍😁😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😊😊😊😍😍😍😍😍😍😊😊😊😊😊😍😍
Wow a novel about Hajime no Ippo... It sure would be amazing.... Let's hope it's as amazing as the anime itself.......,...........................................,.......................................
Nice one😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
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Was interesting at first but became disappointing really fast. The MC doesn't seem to have any goal or motivation for the future. And despite claiming to be 500+ years old, he doesn't show much maturity. ................................................................................................................