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A man reincarnates from one world to another. How will he build his life in this new universe? What will he see and whom will he meet? Those are all great questions...
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for those like me who look at the number of chapters before reading, I will say this - there are huge chapters here and 30 chapters here are like 100-150 chapters in another ff. The story touches little on canon and is more about the world of HP, with the addition of things from other worlds.
started off good, you dont see many AU's this unique. but the sexual deviance turned me off. i dont even care about the harem tag, but every sexual interaction in this novel is just uncomfortable and weird. also, theres a lot of nothing chapters. where the mc just walks around like hes the witcher doing quests. he also has no real goals throughout the story. just mini goals with his education. the story leads nowhere, sexual deviance of a weird sort, and boring chapters questing along the wizarding world.
The idea of the story is good, however the dialog is quite bad and doesn´t feel natural at all - especially with the female characters - it´s too robotic and there are some translation and continuity errors. All in all it´s something that can be read but don´t expect a masterpiece or hidden gem
This is good story the concept of archive magic in hp is good i hope you wont drop this
Автору, привет😘 Это реально алзол? Или кто то другой...,.......................,.... ..........................,.............. ..............,.
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
The idea is great but the dialogue and lack of personality in most characters kinda breaks immersion. @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
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It's a fresh take on the harry potter world and I'm all for it. It doesn't just revolve around Hogwarts and magical britain but the mc travels to other places in the world as well and doesn't hesitate to do what's necessary for his growth. How I hope the updates become more frequent. You are doing a amazing work with this story.
I like it a lot I didn’t think it was a translation till reading the comments and the story is good and go deeper in the hp world [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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a hidden gem, top fanfic with a lot of other elements included. Curious to see in which directions the plot will develop. Keep going author and keep the chapters coming [img=update][img=update][img=update]
Muito potencial, começo razoável porém perde completamente todo o sentido nos capítulos futuros não há desenvolvimento de personagens, o mc anda por todo mundo e não usa a merda da magia arquivo em muito lugares utilizáveis, além do sexo sem noção e aleatório PS: não gostei da ideia de precisar absorver almas pra aumentar o poder ele já tinha o método da pedra filosofal sem contar a quatidade de conhecimento que ele pode adquirir ele poderia inventar um
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I am fed up with all these novels with harem tags. God! Why can't authors just write a descent novel with no harem, no system just a story where main character is just smart and hard working (By the way I am just ranting no offense to who ever like these type of shit)