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A patron-sponsored story following the Main Character, Kahn, as he ventures through the Actualized World of Legend of Korra.
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What can I say. Once again Ein gives us a good story that instead of being a simple wish fulfillment nuilds on and expands the world shown in the original. The grammer is great, everything is explained in a way that shouldn't leave us with many uncertainities and the dialogues feel real. LOK would have been a lot better if this was the original since there is no forced interactins made only to appeal to NPC and SJW. To sum it up a great read. Btw. For anyone unaware. If you become a p.a.t. r.e.o.n you can access more chapters since Ein started it because of his patrons request. Hope you join us!!!
I've never seen Legend of Korra nor been interested in Avatar fanfics, but the story is holding my easy-easy interest. And my desire to see more just keeps increasing. Thanks for your hard work, Einlion. And I hope it's successful.
This was written by Einlion so the quality is not even to be questioned. I personally like this a lot, it's simply too good to not read. The problem I have is that this Main character doesn't feel like a person. well, I guess that's done on purpose but, to me, it is a turn-off. I will explain what I mean. At the beginning of the story, the main character said he is going to protect the Avatar from dangers and protect her from the witness and slyness of human politics because an avatar should not be concerned with such matters. and he wouldn't share his knowledge with them either. those were the two promises he made. A couple of chapters later he is forced to separate himself from the Avatar. the reason for that honestly isn't what actually matters. it's how he will just "bend" at moments noticed. for all the knowledge that he has, people will just push him around with wordplay and twisted logic, that is what annoys me the most actually. and it's exactly because it is Einlion writing this that I know stuff like that will keep happening in the future. As for the former point I mentioned. him not being a person. At some point in the story, Einlion's main character from his Danmachi fanfic comes and modifies this one. because he made him. so basically he is a homunculus. that's the main turn-off for me. I don't want the main character whose thoughts and actions will suddenly change because his creator came by and said "you are too standoffish " as the reason. heck, I want it to be his story.
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super you can find out how many chapters there will be in the future I wanted more masterpiece[img=recommend]supersupersupersupersupersupersupersuper
haven’t read it yet but aren’t many chapters so i’ll wait a bit to write a full review. this is my placeholder for now but i have it 5 stars just based on authors other books. talented guy and love the concept :)
It's well written. It does have misteryes. There are smooth character interaction. What more could I want????? ....................................................................... More updates!!!
The had an interesting premise. The choice to end the main villains in the story so early wasn't a wise choice. Who else can give them a proper fight to make this story interesting.Also mc is too Op the only room he has for growth is physiological which to me is a drag. The whole relationship with kora in it self limits her freedom. She's never really in danger so how can she really grow when he's always there.
not bad , not bad ( Лень много писать,я русский все таки., после первых 2 глав я лишь надеюсь,что фик не будут растягивать на глав 200, где после этого дай бог начнется сюжет. Посмотрим))) P,S I'm Russian!
Whooooaaa new novels From elion sama thank you very much , honestly I didn't know this was yours when I clicked it I was just serching for something new to read good luck 🤞
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When I read this I feel Turkish delight in my soul. The works are easy to read and on the same wavelength, the author knows his business, I'm waiting for the continuation more than my birthday
I'm on chapter 500+ on path and having break I hope this was a good one too. ...............................................................
This Is EPIC!!!!!! ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Very nice man. Keep work -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Ok first I was heavily confused about who the creator of kahn was, and people referencin things i had no idwa about, like the infinite paths. However after checking the authors profile I was suprised and things started clicking, besides the updating stability (which I think he is working on) this is without a doubt a 5 star book, and the second best avatar fic so far.
I have not read the book yet I'm giving it a 5 star with regrets withheld on not being able to give more. Why, you ask? Is there even a need to ask? It Him! With a new story, a cherry on the top I would say. When I first read EPIC, I used to even curse, why is that I have to even sleep, I could have spent those precious hours on read this amazing work describable beyond art. After all, how the character maybe, simp or edgey, Alpha or beta, or mixture of both, Ein brings total story to the light, making any character feel like real beings, totally fleshing out the characters, the way he proceeds with the character is just, just, ....I got no words. Yeah, just sometimes 'bed romance' chapters were too big, not that I am complaining~ Anyways you gotta read~ You Gotta Read This~!