I can tell this story is going to be good but first off personally i think it should be a comic story but thats totally my opinion it would make the reader become more involved in the story because they can see the charectars and how they look thats all i wanted to say thank you if you read this and i hope it helps you
I can tell this story is going to be good but first off personally i think it should be a comic story but thats totally my opinion it would make the reader become more involved in the story because they can see the charectars and how they look thats all i wanted to say thank you if you read this and i hope it helps you