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Love On Chaos

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Tears were streaming through Eli's cheeks, his eyes were bloody red, its been so long yet the pain, the aches, the memories were haunting him, he can't escape his fantasy, is he dreaming, tell him, he is because, he doesn’t know if he can win this battle, this game, played by me, her, and destiny.
Today 6th of December, its been years since they met, the most beautiful woman, the most caring, the brightest star in the sky the one he thought who’ll never leave his side, yet here he is, in their favorite place, the place where they smiled as wide as they can, laugh as hard as they could, the place where they witness the beauty of the sun descending and the gorgeousness of the moon ascending, but now, he’s alone, reminiscing the past. After waiting for the sun to set, he left there hidden spot and spoke in a low baritone voice. “I’ll hold on to your promise, my love."

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    RaufaRashyd

    I really liked the idea of your story. You are a skilled writer. The synopsis of the story would attract a lot of readers for sure because it got me spooked. All the best and keep of uploading more.

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    Stevent1679

    I reccomend you try to read this Novel, The novel is very interesting. I can feel the emotions written in this story. The plot plots presented are pretty good .. :)

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    Mkhulu_Mtungwa

    I completely trusted Dr Paul totally from the time I spoke with him during the period my husband Left me  after11 years of our marriage, He started the spell work on my husband, and gave me so much assurance and guaranteed me that he was going to bring my husband back to my feet in just 48 hours of the spell casting. I was so confident in his work and just as he said in the beginning, my husband is finally back to me again, yes he is back with all his hearts, Love, care, emotions and flowers and things are better now. I would have no hesitation to recommend this powerful spell caster to anybody who is in need of help.. E-mail; astoriashrine @ gmail com

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    cephiius

    Very interesting and entertaining. The plot makes me excited and the characters are pretty fun! I appreciate the improvement of writing quality every chapter as well and I hope for that more. Also hope to read more works from you :)

    4yr
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    Soul_Ruler

    Recommend this book to people who love romance I loved the synopsis of the story all ready 😃😃😃😃😃😃 not a waste of time 📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚

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    marichat_nettenoir

    The emotions, the chapters...they’re all so interesting, after I write this comment, I’m going to continue readinh this interesting yet intriguing book.

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    Midnyt_Zun

     I give this book one hundred stars! There is a "to be continued" at the end so you have to read the next chapter see what's in. I can't wait to find out what happens!!! Keep it up! Goodluck!!! 👍👍👍

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    Malignant

    Once again, I'm brutally honest about my reviews so... The grammar is okay-ish and is understandable aside from the occasional lack of punctuation, minor spelling mistakes, and capitalization. I want to give it a two, but these things can be worked on. Characters aren't really fleshed out and it seemed like they just popped up to be there and do their tasks. This includes the main character. The setting wasn't clearly specified or explained which made me quite confused as I read through everything. Overall, this book can be considered as good if the above points can be worked on.

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    Gabriel_Titus_Bril

    I haven't read it yet but the way how the sypnosis has begun is quite interesting . I ssuggest you read this book.Love on Chaos.It is not waste of Time I assure you

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    Zuxian
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    I say to you that, as a reader you don't want to miss out on this book. You have no idea quite the numbers of things you would learn. It's so obvious from the plot. Grab a cuppa, take a seat and enjoy the author's fantasy.

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    Midnight_Raven0425

    Hey y'all! This is Midnight Raven and this novel right here is of course my work... Hope you guys support this and I assure you a roller-coaster ride of emotions. A bit of a Spoiler. The first 15 chapters are where the other chapters will rose. Events will be surprising once you get to finish them. Sending warm hugs, from the Philippines.

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    AinaWang

    Beautiful and sweet story, a must-read 🌷 The author had a refreshing writing style that made me continue reading, plus the words are easy to understand 🌻

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