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Lord of Time

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Arden receives a mysterious watch as an inheritance from his late grandfather. Upon further inspection, the number 95 mysteriously appears on the face of the watch. Shortly after, he realizes that the owner of the treasurer is granted the ability to manipulate time. However, before he is able to explore his newfound powers, the magic condensed around him and Arden is transported to another world filled with fantasy and magic.

Follow Arden's journey down the path of tragedy, hardship, and power.

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wamlabish

I see MyCall, I say yes! I've only read 3 words but I like those words five out of five stars. Someone sign this writer pls I liek him very much big read potential yes.

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yunisao
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I think the premise of the story is very interesting. The first chapter really hooks you in! Some grammar mistakes (but who has perfect grammar? I certainly don’t lol), but overall the novel so far is good. I hope to see more updates soon!

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260821
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Author coming through. This is my first webnovel so there's obviously room for improvement. If there's a part that you're unsatisfied with, please do leave a review or a comment. I will try to have consistent updates but it's not something I can promise for the long term. Thanks for reading! :)

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really liked it. i especially like the cover with the one girl. i like the story and the name "Lord of Time". I liked how there was a synopsis for the story and I liked how there are multiple chapters. The characters are well developed. Arden was my favorite one. The way he's the Lord of Time is really inspiring to me. Ten out of ten, when I eventually have kids after landing a hot e-girlfriend, I will read this as a bedtime story. FINAL RATING: Four outta five, not sexy enough.

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stella2138

I haven't read it yet but the cover tells me its gonna be worth reading so i got your back. proceeding to read. 5 stars for cover and writing quality.can i baptise the author with stars when i finish reading?

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soulla

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.

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Ahmed_reader

The only good thing is the translation quality. I came having high hopes because of the time ability but all I get is the usual cliché things. Also, why is he not using his ability? He has many oppurtinities to use his power and when he does it's utterly garbagé. He can strike but uses his power to dodge and even let's someone beat him. I would accept this but the responses the characters are giving is screaming CLICHÉ.

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dusty_angel

Wow, I have to admit, this story is quite interesting! I love how the author wrote it in 1st POV. Most webnovels here are written in 3rd person. The writing style is straightforward with enough imagery to describe the current setting. The dialogue is very natural and modern, very believable. There are some grammar mistakes here and there, but nothing too distracting. Keep up the good work!

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Animegod55

amazing work !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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