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A 25-year-old man with a chaotic, disorderly and antisocial life tries to survive an invasion of the earth, which makes public a war between superior beings.
The earth will have the support of the system, a technological advance developed by the god Techno, but the earthlings will soon realize that they can only save themselves and they will try to understand what is this Chaotic Universe in which they live.
Viktor, the earthling who accumulated more chaotic energy will be the one who, by an unexpected event related to the eye of a powerful being, will be able to gain the power to try to discover the truths of this universe.
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I am not a native English speaker, so I may have some grammatical errors at first, I will try to fix them when I could.
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The characters and events portrayed in this novel are completely fictitious. Any resemblance to real people, living or dead, or to real events is purely coincidental.
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Great story, the start was perfect and you describe the world in which they are living well. I have nothing bad to point out in your novel, your grammar and punctuation are good which is important for a novel. Would recommend this to everyone who likes system novels.
I really liked the story, I got the idea that the story was a mix between fantasy and science fiction, I hope I can read more chapters, so keep doing what you are doing
Definitely love the world background and the story development as the chapter goes on. And as for the MC, at least he's got some determination to push through with what life throws at him.
The writing works well and the development of the story works quite well. The world-building would be a bit more described but other than that, it's quite good.
the plot is very loved it, the characters especially to the main characters are admiring and I continue to read it by the way I like the synopsis. its very interesting.
Nice, you write well without showing too many mistakes in grammar or punctuation. i like the way youre taking this on the characters. i too am not a fan of 1 dimensional villains or characters that simply have one quirk that defines their whole persona. The world could be described more intricately but i believe youve done a good job. keep writing ✍️
Really unique power system and anarchy world. It is very exciting to read what will happen next as it is always something new and unexpected, I recommend it!
I liked everything about the story, it is pretty good with descriptions and definitely exciting, Kudos to the author. I am gonna read this till the end and wish to see more spicy content in the upcoming chapters ❤️❤️❤️
So afar its been pretty good, i liked the start and also our belived ml, who reminds me of me sometimes, this book is definitely worth reading and I’d asvice everyone to come read it[img=recommend]
Hi, My name is Victoria and you write really well! I would like to inquire if you are interested in trying to work on an interactive novel? Our company is in the beginning stages of rolling out this scripted interactive game worldwide, so if you'd like to work on a new paid creation or would like to do that adaptation of the book, please feel free to get in touch with me!
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Hello, I am the author. The rhythm of the novel starts a bit slow, but then it picks up and I think it becomes exciting. I have tried to make the characters vivid and believable. I don't like to create a villain who is simply evil and idiotic, nor an MC like that. I focus quite a bit on the characters and their emotions, so there will be several characters who have emotions and thoughts that can be seen in the novel. I think there are many exciting and a bit strange elements (For example, different layers of the system, which can connect with other users, and exotic powers of different people like a necromancer who uses teleportation magic). The world is wide and I try to bring it to life, showing different events in the work, for example descriptions of scenes that happen in other places in the world or universe.