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A couple of words from the author: after chapter 3, the writing style changes; don’t be afraid of the first two chapters, because I really screwed up there when I wrote this.
This is the story of a guy who met God and was sent to another world at will by acting according to his choice. There is no mention of training for yourself or overcoming challenges. The main character is strong from the start, and this is a light-hearted story without the darkness, betrayal and other complications often found in any work. I came up with the story myself and then corrected and translated it using ChatGPT. English is not my native language, so please forgive any mistakes.
I'll write this right away for the stupid potatoes who will read this. This is literally my first experience in writing history and something similar. Before this, I only wrote diploma papers and term papers, not counting filling out documents at work, so I apologize in advance if something does not suit you. Enjoy reading!
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Taking the Webnovel criteria, this book's score is 3.8 for me... and I'll explain why! firstly, it is the quality of the writing, which in the first chapters is quite bad but improves as the chapters go on (obviously it did not reach an optimal level, which is why I gave it 4 stars)... the second point is the development of the story which I didn't see any real writing plan, and I feel that the author is a little lost besides things that don't make sense like Hephaestus trusting a mortal to show his cursed eye, or her not being able to see at least the properties of the Yamato sword! and the third point is character development, which I didn't feel any development in the MC or anyone in the story, in addition to the fact that we often follow some clichés from other stories like attacking Bate Loga for example
so I've read until the og Mc bell is being gender bent (ima leave for that) but my question is, is this harem if so ⬇️
Thanks for finally making a straightforward reincarnation danmachi fic with good mc for that you deserve 5 stars.
good concept but at its core the fic is so boring .good enough if you have noting els to read.......................................................................................................
Writing quality and the premise of the story are good. sadly we have a wimpy and soft edgelord as an mc which ruins the characters and the story development... too much drama and beta edgelord behaviour...
honestly i'm seeing alot of improvement passed the 10th chapter mark. keep up the good work author , add a little more details when explaining and try not to repeat the same sentence twice , i noticed in chapter 11 when goddess of the forge asked for an explanation the same lines were repeated , i don't know if it was a mistake or not but try not to let it happen often [img=proud]
On chapter 71. An interesting mc who just wants to live in peace and it's interesting to watch his development. The development of the plot is interesting, there is no stupid following the canon, but unexpected events may occur and there will be consequences from them, it will not seem like a filler. And an interesting development of the surrounding characters. I hope that it will continue to be cool, and the fic will not be abandoned.
Honestly very good book, it has of funny good laugh moments that fit in and can take you off guard which make it all the more enjoyable! - 10/10 keep up the good work 👍🫨
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3 Stars 5 Stars 4 Stars 4 Stars 5 Stars All in all it is a fine book could be better but it also could be worse [img=recommend][img=recommend]
In my years of experience here in web, sometimed I'll find this type of fics, in my opinion, I or we readers get bored with it easily, my suggestion is that make it interesting enough that we'll keep reading .. that's it.
Writing Quality is very good 5⭐, story development is average 3⭐, Character design 0⭐, Updating stability 3⭐, world Background 2⭐. For the main problem MC was to much cringe. The title is about Demon King but the reality was downgraded slave
story is good, but Author butchered MC's power, MC has Anos' power and yet most of the power MC use so far is not even how the powers work. Anos is a multiverse lvl being, fact check is in Light Novel, Anos has the power to CREATE a WHOLE universe, he can make anything with his power, yet Author butchered it just cuz he lazy to do research, he only shows powers that was showed in the anime and not from novel. There are many other things, but I just don't feel to list them or its gonna be a LONGGGG list.
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As much as I like overpowered characters, this one isn't for me. Beginning with the hard-to-read, without your intestines twisting, dialogue. That will probably get better rather quickly, but it still should be included in the review. Next we have genderbent Bell. Bella? It's not my cup of tea, but okay. For me, the dealbreaker is the characters that will become the main cast. [I'm ending after the second chapter, so it's mostly my speculations.] I'm pretty sure he will join Hestia's familia; I don't like Hestia; in the second chapter there was Eina, and I also hate her, and knowing that there will be Bell (Bella), there will be Liliruca, and I also hate her... So that's a no for me. I don't want to leave a review without anything really constructive, so: The protagonist's feeling of power is extremely weird. I mean, or guy has Anos's power yet acts really weird. The second chapter gave a feeling like he was weak. That's acceptable, but it should be said why that is. If that's because he hasn't familiarized himself with his abilities or something, as it is, it feels like Anos power got a nerf, just because the protagonist's thoughts aren't transparent enough. There is a lack of clear statement or at least a speculation of how strong he is in terms of the Danmachi world. The protagonist's personality is all over the place. Guy feels as if he has grown up on dad's jokes. But those were so bad that nobody even knew that they were supposed to be jokes. I mean, the "I will find work in hell" and random laughter in public. He is more like a caricature than a human. Feels like a downgraded version of Kyojuro Rengoku.
I decided to leave a review for myself because, as a friend of mine once said, "If you don't praise yourself, no one else will." So, I decided to praise myself for starting to write instead of just lying around and suffering from the heat. This is an ordinary story about the everyday life of a person in a fantasy world. There won't be a main character who constantly struggles and gets beaten up only to win through the power of friendship. No, the hero of this story will win instantly just because he can.