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Let’s rev it up yu-gi-oh 5d’s retold.

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作者: Ian_Brooks_6315

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After dying in. Motorcycle crash Issac joans is transmigrated as yusei Fido with a system that allows him to create his own Cards and D-wheel now his goal is to become a pro turbo duelist and bring fortune to satellite.

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CraveBear

Honest Review: It seems someone has come to the point of no return: They have made... FAN, FICTION! (Dun, Dun, DEEEEN). In all seriousness, the writer DID try to make A decent story, but due to the quality and speed of the story, I just couldn't follow. This story's definitely not one I'D sync up with. Don't get me wrong, changing A genre from Dystopian Fantasy to Sci-Fi Fantasy can definitely work, but when you draw A Bricked Hand in your mind, there is only so many cards you can play. I mentioned before about the speed. The problem with that speed is that it doesn't give the time to think. In the first part alone, Mystery is already cranked to 100. This problem's problem is that it isn't ideal to leave so much from your ghostly spectator, and instead show them anything, but leave it out of the CHARACTER'S hands. Have you heard of the term, "Metagaming,"? In TTRPG's like D.N.D, Metagaming is when you use your own knowledge of something in game that your CHARACTER would know NOTHING about. This story sometimes tries to Metawrite. Have A good day, or night, depending on when and where you read this!

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aramix_453

it's to fast the duel and how character interact with it feel hollow so I where you start a rewrite but and some characterization to yusei as character.

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  • テキストの品質
  • アップデートの安定性
  • ストーリー展開
  • キャラクターデザイン
  • 世界の背景

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