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Land of Magic

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作者: Vincinia

3.98 (22 レビュー結果)

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Reincarnated into the world from Harry Potter, Richard Snow will learn how to become one hell of a wizard and will look how he can have fun in this world an learn all about magic.

This will be a novel without a complete badass MC who is overpovered in the first second, yes he will become stronger than most others but to gain his powers he will gradually develope over time.

Timeline is a few years before canon and I will not complete follow the golden trio whatsoever. There will be no copy and paste lines as I hate them. All will be written as I see it and want it to be.

This is also and alternate universe and there will be some changes.

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Zan_M
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really good and with potential, without stupid harem and gradual progress, continue with the story I'm loving it, I hope a well developed novel, keep up the good work

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Ray77der

It was a good story. I liked the way the story was progressing. But then the protagonist just went ahead and messed with the canon. Why would he do that? He is in a new world , while barely knowing anything and having almost no power. There are loads of people who suffer injustice all the time, everywhere. Why is he putting himself in danger for people he knows nothing about? That a actually erased every interest I had in this story.

3yr
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Hit1903

While the plot is good enough, you really need to work on the grammar. I could barely understand it. peace. ,..,.........,..................

3yr
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Alabado_sea_gonza

I stopped reading after it interfered with the original plot. I honestly expected more when in the description it mentioned not following the protagonists. I was expecting him to explore more of the world of HP with the plot of the books as secondary and no longer interfering to change the plot. It got off to a good start and looks promising, but it's not what I was looking to read at the moment.

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Phoenix1998

nice. Plot is good. Excited for more. nice. Plot is good. Excited for more.nice. Plot is good. Excited for more.nice. Plot is good. Excited for more.

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Feliximaout

Another one of those storys where the MC somehow changes everything at the age of 3 and every aduld around just goes along with it. If you just need to shout for an houself to appear out of thin air ready to fulfill your every wish, then the Weaslys would have one too. They dont and they haven't. Just what you would expect from a story which needs 40+ chapters just to get to the point where he enters Hogwarts. Writing quality is decent so a good point there. I know there are people who enjoi these kind of storys, I am just not one of them.

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Vincinia

Hello, I am so rude and give myself a nice 5-star review. Because why not :D I do hope that my novel is interesting and I am trying to go more in-depth about the way magic works and the background of the whole world. Just enjoy reading this and I wish everyone a nice day.

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Insane_Pumpkin

Good fanfic, a little slow story development at the start but it was faster later, now the only thing left is waiting for more chapters, i will be back to reread it when it reaches 25-30 chapters.

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Phoenix1998

Really liked the story. interesting. More please. Really liked the story. interesting. More please.Really liked the story. interesting. More please.

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MonsterCreator

I like the new theories or atleast not too much used theories in this story and you can do better but in my opinion this novel is in the best 10% of HP fanfics keep up

3yr
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Mishaela_Lucoji

All in all a more enjoyable fanfic that doesn't devolve into harem fantasy. Not entirely won over by mcs personality but at least I don't feel like I need to delouse myself after reading about thier adventures.

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Kraug
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unnecessary long and not needed explanation. Another ff of mc babysitting the plot. Maybe it's enjoyable for other but not for me. For me ff supposed to be something different from the canon

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Rizki_Caturianto

A great story.. I like when MC need times to be strong, not just given power.. I like sniffy (it's new to me that house-elf can be an full elf).. I hope Kyle can get his revenge.. and who is Imorin?? How strong he is?? Is he will be they're enemies or friend or mentor?? Can't wait to see next chapter 😁👍👍

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Nacht_Imp

Waste of your time. Snail pace and useless filler. ####№###№#######################\##\\\\\\\##############################################

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SSan1212

Op MC fine read. go for it if you are bored. Op MC fine read. go for it if you are bored. Op MC fine read. go for it if you are bored. Op MC fine read. go for it if you are bored. Op MC fine read. go for it if you are bored. Op MC fine read. go for it if you are bored. Op MC fine read. go for it if you are bored. Op MC fine read. go for it if you are bored.

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CH405Kaiser

The story has a lot of potential, but unfortunately there is too much being summarized and not enough characterization on how they act. Like the omnipotent being talking to Richard felt bland or was as if they were the same person.

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Docnox
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Set in harry potter? …. eh, barely. Whatever you might expect from a HP fan fic, its not here yet. The pace is glacial and already Has a tangent side character arc, meaning 30+ chaps in and the MC is still underage. Also Very op. So if you like <10 anime heros, go for it. again just dont expect much HP any thing. Heck you could almost jump from the second chapter to the latest and basically missed nothing.

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Lin_Ming_

〜(꒪꒳꒪)〜 ______________(~‾▿‾)~______ ____________(-ᄒᴥᄒ-)__________________ Mmmh Interesting story.._____________ ______I need more chapters !!~~______ (~ ̄³ ̄)~________________〜(ㆁωㆁ)〜

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