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Kaizoku is a young man who had just turned 18. He died when he was celebrating his birthday. When he died, he reincarnated in the body of a boy his age. The body in which he reincarnates is much more beautiful and much stronger. He was looking for information on where he reincarnated. But when he searched, pirates caught him ... | This story is much more serious than my other stories. I'm not going to stop writing this story don't worry. There will be one chapter per week, the chapter will contain 5,000 words. Much more than the other stories. | Don't forget to support me by giving me POWER STONE. | Go subscribe to my YouTube channel it's called ScriptForYou. I’ll be very happy that you subscribe to my YouTube channel. I don't want donations or things like that, I just want you to subscribe to my channel to thank me.
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people give this 5 stars,, and like sure the chps are long, but quality not quantity. First the start, something thats almost half of the first chp, its retarded.. This dude rapes a slut of girl friend...but its really dosnt matter if he rapes her cause she was a slut, cause of the messed up **** she did. she cheated on MC with a lot of guys. so whats the point of raping her?...then he got killed by her cause he like a retard left her unchecked after he raped her. Its so stupid....I dont get what people find so amazing about **** like this?.....also this dude was extremely rich and apparently they knew each other since 12, this cheating seems pointless cause MC could have easily given the chick a better life [author should give a different backstory for MC]....entire **** is stupid and pointless. It takes close half the chp, and MC gets over the revenge, cause he is happy he raped her, yah...he is happy he raped a slut and said slut later killed him for his own stupidity. Then theres his DF, IT is worthless, its flaws take away any of its advantages. it basically repels attack, MC takes hit and sends it back, thats the concept but it has so many restrictions that it makes its stupid..Like one of DF abilities is to stay in place by absorbing attack, tekkai could easily do this if trained high enough, so DF is useless..........plus 3 forms of haki and the aura type haki admirals used makes this DF kinda useless....I mean, its strength benefit of lifting 10 tons is useless....any read admiral could probably lift that much easily. So far MC isnt smart nor is his power interesting, I dont get why people gave this 5 stars? **: do note that this is a review based on my opinion and what I thought
I'm doing this story for fun during confinement so for fun. I hope you enjoy it, also tell me what I need to improve in my story so that I can improve in the future. If you want to support me go subscribe to my YouTube channel it's called ScriptForYou. I also hope that I will not stop producing chapters for this story.
will read it till 10chp.. 5star for ur motivation maybe.. ୧| ͡ᵔ ﹏ ͡ᵔ |୨ᕦ(ಠ_ಠ)ᕤᕦ(ò_óˇ)ᕤᕦ[ ◑ □ ◑ ]ᕤᕦ⊙෴⊙ᕤᕦ( ⊡ 益 ⊡ )ᕤᕙ[･･]ᕗᕙ( ¤ 〰 ¤ )ᕗᕙ( ¤ 〰 ¤ )ᕗ
Good.