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I like the the story and the concept a lot. wanted to see a fan-fiction about the lord of mysteries because it has a lot of unexplored paths such as the key of light the author of this used .
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I absolutely love this fanfic, characters are good, story is interesting and fun to read but the best part about this is our MC, because he is actually smart and uses his brain. Another thing I really like are his powers, you build and explore the idea of human magic as well as his system in intriguing way while not limiting yourself to one power, you're always expand MC's arsenal which makes it fresh without being tedious to read. I really hope you will try to expand the world of DxD it has a lot of wasted potential by being solely focused of Japan, from what I've seen you're trying to do just that so please keep it that way and don't stay in Japan for too long, think about visiting Greece but I personally really want to see your edition of Egyptian pantheon. All I have left to say is this - DON'T DROP IT.
When I know what is the crossover is I couldn't stop the grin from almost splitting my face from how excited I was. it's really good for just five-chapter and couldn't wait for more I hope the author the best of luck and I think if done right the crossover will be amazing.
I just like it, so I'm trying to share my thought. I'm completely new to this so I will just leave it here. So,my taste is childish, I know. There are no other reason i read it besides I'm bored. But after I read it it does put a smile on my face. I get cringe and all, but overall I laugh and smile. So author, your work made me smile today, thank you.
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Currently chapter 21 Writing quality- pretty ok i guess? My mind auto corrects the wrong spellings or grammar so i might not notice it but i guess it's ok Story dev- pretty good, a bit slow paced but it's not to the point it will become really boring Char design- also good, he's op but not too op Updating stab- dunno, i'll give it 4 star because it's not updating anymore but have atleast 40+ chaps World back- dxd, a lil' crossover of majikoi, but only one character(momoyo), and if you doubt her abilities, try playing all the games or just search it on the wiki lol
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A very good novel in general, Momoyo is annoying but I can tolerate her, a shame that the author will leave it paused for two months and for that reason I will have to leave the novel.
The story is alright. Needs a lot of editing grammar wise and some rearranging for the sentence structure in my opinion. The MC rather instantly becomes OP and there are some points where it doesn't make sense or the logic is sort of left it for you to guess at which is annoying. The fact that its a crossover world with bunch of merged makes the world background unkown and messy. Still, an okay casual read.
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MAN Seriously this Author here is UNDERRATED he isn't that famous but his Fanfiction is great there are logic and explanation. I really wonder why this author is UNDERRATEd? But Author-sama Your work is great keep it up!!
First things first i want more of that kind of fanfic ( LotM crossover ) !! Second i like the way the pathway "gimicks" are used. Third while i have a different view of the sequences "acting" i still like the way it is woven in the storie. All in all a good read ( still waiting for more.. )
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I am back with another detailed review before I begin to rate and criticise, I would first like to explain what this novel is all about. Mc is someone teleported to DxD, he is the partner of the crazy priest with the sole goal of survival in his mind. Mc follows the power system of "Lord of The Mysteries", " Wheel of fortune Pathway" to be specific. The story starts with Mc having average level power with a few basic perks while also gaining experience with the crazy priest, like the Mc levels up the sequence, he unlocks more abilities, he is very and I mean VERY op in using [Human Magic] due to the abilities provided by his pathway. He tries to stay away from plot as much as he can while grinding his powers, he is smart and careful, as a beyonder should be, he also actively avoids trouble. He has also gained the interest of Nyx, though the time of their interaction is not much, a chapter or two. The novel also contains elements, not from DxD world. Now, we got that out of the way, let's see the stats. Character development (4.8/5):-Very nicely portrayed, his personality is consistent, the Mc behaves and acts like a human with decent intelligence. Overall, his character is very realistic. Story Development (4.7/5):-Quite nice, better than most especially since the plot of the novel is totally original and very entertaining. The only problem with the development is that Mc suddenly gets a lot of power-ups, like too much so to say, which isn't a bad thing but the increase in power feels a bit absurd, especially considering the beginning of the story. World background (4.3/5):-Decent world background, not overly explained but still lacking in-depth, I like the approach that the author is using, introducing little elements so that he can easily write about them, one of the reasons why people drop novels is because of too many elements and too little depth of elements. My personal thoughts (4.6/5):-This just might be the best DxD fanfic on this platform, and believe me, I have read a lot of them, a LOT. Things that can be improved, well just focus on adding more depth to the powers he already possesses.