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Journeyman's Next Journey

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作者: Konkey_Dong

4.67 (11 レビュー結果)

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The National Basketball Association.

It was the holy grail, the greatest desire, the final destination, of every aspiring basketball player on the planet.

It was the place where dreams are born, and heroes are made.

Tremaine Mills was one of the thousands of basketball players that embarked on the arduous path to the NBA.

But just like countless athletes before him, he failed to live his NBA dream. His talents instead took him to the wildest destinations across the globe, where he honed his craft and took chance after chance he could to get to the NBA.

And then he was a 37 year old veteran journeyman at the end of his career...

At the end of his last championship run as a basketball pro… he collapsed.

Next thing he knew, he was in his freshman dorm room, waking up to the sight of two naked friends of his!

With his decades of experience as a pro, Tremaine will once again walk the long, arduous road to the NBA!

Will Tremaine get there this time?

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Chapter word count: 1000-1500 words

I'll do my best to keep up at least 6-7 chapters a week!

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KingOJD
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Dont let us down with this absolutely amazing story, Im wishing the best for this story and its amazing potential. As long as its not dropped the story will be wonderful

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PinnacleExistence

I remembered writing a review when author mentioned in chapter 16, lol.. it's a great novel, the beginning might be harder to adjust, but it's amazing. especially if are into some of the in-depth things that happen in basketball, as the plays author describes are something of it's own in this novel. there isn't much as of now, just knowing the characters and how daily life, but it all gives some good vibes energy that it will blow once they start playing in the NCAA.

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Muspon
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this novel is great especially past chapter 15ish i agree with the other reviewer who said that the first chapters were rough around the edges but it gets better and can definitely become one of the best sports novel out there (not that theres many)

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KingMan
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I really like the beginning of this novel, I am not to leave many reviews but there are not many basketball novels on this platform and reading Chinese novels is not very pleasant because it is all the same, I leave you a tip and it is that you try to describe the people in more detail because when I read I did not imagine the person, I also suggest that you try to develop more the personalities of each character, give a unique touch to each character and make it look less like a robot if you know how to what I mean, but this is just my perspective and you probably already have an idea for the future of history anyway I like the beginning good work

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Giro
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We need more sports stories. I'm thrilled with the way you write and I'm very excited about the potential of your novel. I really hope you won't drop this, thank you for your work.

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kobeblackmamba

Dont let us down with this absolutely amazing story, Im wishing the best for this story and its amazing potential. As long as its not dropped the story will be wonderful

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Daoist819201

Very good basketball story, one of the best i ever read. Very good basketball story, one of the best i ever read. Very good basketball story, one of the best i ever read.

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reqrwq2

First, Its not a sport novel even if it seems like it at first. Its a slice of life fluff story where MC happened to be basket ball player. And his reincarnation back story is a total waste. His mentality, intelligence, emotional maturity is still sub per teen level even though he was 37 years old before. So read the novel just don't expect MC to play basketball. But he watches his team play from the bench all the time bit think of himself as God as he is reincarnated. Even after all those years of experience he is just on the same level of other talented players. So if author writes with logic then because of MC's sub intelligence and skill & talent he will turn from super rookie into another average joe in three to four years then after some he will be on the level of low skilled NBA players and everyone will forget his name.

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Alfabit
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I dont really like leaving reviews, But i wanna support a quality sports novel. Every character is fleshed out and motivated in their own way, the mc is of course really good as a reincarnate. The plot, game descriptions, all well written. Hope the author keeps it up!!

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Buggy_The_Clown

5 star cause I'm a basketball fan. .

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TOS
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I like this novel so far. However I have one minor complaint that wouldn't deter anyone from reading this novel. In the aerly chapters (before the time skip in chapter 9), The mc was shown to have amazing skills like the smooth dribbling and the amazing floater. But in my humble opinion, those aren't skills you get just because you went back to the past and had the experience of doing it once. I think that if the current body is not accustomed to those skills it wouldn't work out that well. Anyway, that was a small complaint on my part. The story developpement is good, the pacing of the story is also good so far. However you also need to add a lot more details to the dailogues in order to make it more life-like as you do with the game description. Overall a good read that I would recommend people to check as it is one of the only two basketball novels I'm enjoying in this platform.

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