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the god is tired of being a god, so over 1,000 people from all over the universe have been picked. only one can be the next god.
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MC is a greedy bastard that will kill anyone to gain more power. But, that is perfectly normal considering the fact he is in a death game to become a god.
Really bad. The grammar will be barely readable for 2 sentences, then on the next sentence you will wonder if you had a stroke. He just has to touch someone's neck to get stronger and gain their memories. The entire story is just him killing people. It starts with him choosing to fast forward until sasuke gets his genin team. Then he absorbs half the kyuubi from naruto. Then the zabuza mission starts and he's a combat master, easily killing the ambushers and stealing zabuzas sword. Absolutely 0 development this entire time, just 'he did this, then that.' The only thoughts we get are tiny bits of his plans, an example is him thinking he'll let kakashi and haku fight more so he can kill and absorb them when they're exhausted. An example at how bad the story telling is, is as soon as he wakes up as sasuke getting assigned his genin team, he starts flirting with ino. No explanation or inner thoughts as to why, author had to tell us in the comments that he plans on using her. Just fights and killing over and over. After zabuza it skips to him stealing half of gaaras power, then immediately skips to him fighting hiruzen and orochimaru at the same time. The only story in between that is him saying he will train with shadow clones to get used to his new strength, then he goes to where he can fight hiruzen. He's somehow at the kage level from absorbing a few people, yet after absorbing edo tensei hashirama he can only make a fist size piece of wood. Author said in the comments that it's because they don't want it to seem like the main character hasn't worked for his power... Like really??? You think he's worked at all in the three fights he's been in to gain the strength to beat hiruzen, orochimaru and edo tensei hashirama, tobirama and minato at the same time??? Are you even thinking when writing? It's just an awful power trip with awful grammar with zero characterization. The plot and his actions aren't even explained half the time, and the time that it IS explained is during a fight. The only explanations are either 'I want to absorb this persons power' or 'I want to kill this person, because unlike the previous person they won't be useful later.' Oh and don't forget him 'earning' his power by using a single month and shadow clones to perfectly master the use of enough strength to beat 5 kage levels at once. :
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all in all... the book has potential, anf i mean this would be very good, if the writing quality was higher and it was less rushed, it would be nice if the author went over and revised his chapters
you have so many novels that arent completed and have been dropped i hope you dont drop this one LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
don't recommend this the concept is good but the application is trash the grammar drop so much after chapter 3 it's not even worth it read at your own risk the MC contradict himself every two sentences
First of all, the grammar. Oh god my eyes, I have read every single chapter just to be able to say this: There's a huge error in each paragraph. Look, the story is not that bad, is cliche, yes, there's no r18 or other things the tags got so be disappointed. The MC is an evil psycopath that steals powers because he wants to become a god, cliche, not bad, simple and nice. But suddenly he gets super nerfed just because. There is not a single true characterization or conversation, all it is, is bad grammar with the MC lying and betraying everybody. All in all, is entertaining for an afternoon, but I wouldn't even save it in my library.
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its good, I dont why people say its not good? Maybe due to mc killing or not romancing? But if j were in the shoes of MC i would have done the same.