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[Warning this fic is pure wish fulfillment. If you do not like op mc's from the start this is not for you. Also this is purely out of boredom]
Synopsis:
A completely random person finds himself lucky enough to be chosen to go to another/fictional world. Along with some few skills and straight up HAX he now has to survive in his new world.
I don't own Naruto, Highschool DxD, or Demon Slayer.
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He is stronger than azazel by large margin but he's willing to be ordered around by azazel doing stupid stuffs and he even said to yasaka "I'm ordered by governor azazel" "I'm representative of azazel" just stop this stupid sh*t.
love the start just make him the strongest and get him to slap face everyone and collect girls like pokemon. Why the hell would he train him when he has all their skillset,experience and a suitable body to fight? Plus the guy is handsome —> HAREM ROUTE
just the reasons for me not giving u the last 1.2 stars -no moments of MC coming to terms with his power or training his power [now look, I like god like MC..always has requested that **** but here no training? nothing? one moment he SI'd, and the next he is fighting vali ] -Azazel just accepted MC like that...just believed MC's BS...dude, this is the most curious fker in DXD and he is a leader of a faction. No suspicion? nothing, Even after seeing MC's power? its rushed is my point -MC joining the fallen angels...the fallens are probably the most hated and without a doubt the weakest....joining em was useless. [ I would've liked this if it wasnt for the time MC SI'd ] -The time,,seeing as MC is age of the vali, this probably a couple months before cannon....so no time for exploration ?, follow cannon? [hopefully I'll be wrong and u'd fk cannon]. -First thing coming into DXD he does is fight vali. -And dude dosnt seem smart, cause of **** he did so far Look this is just a wish fullment FF, like an actual wish fullfillment That said, I did enjoy it, still the points mentioned above does not make it dope **: OP MC is nice..keep it like that
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I'm only here to say one thing: I don't care about this fanfic at all, all I'm here is to support the author and say that he should focus more on his Naruto and Atg fanfic. reasons: 1. All three of authors fanfics are all Naruto related meaning he knows his naruto. He could finish his Naruto fanfic quicker. 2. Author said he doesn't really know the plot of dxd apart from the animes. Meaning he woukd get stuck writing since he doesn't know the story. 3. Why are u still reading u already know I want more of the Naruto and Atg fics.
Sometimes i think how a retard can even write so much bullshit, i know the you are not the most intelligent ones of our race, but come on this is basic.
meh it's a harem which i dont like and the mc does basically nothing filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler
I think you should continue the fic and you should probably give mc a bigger 🧠/iq.now in the name of eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeexxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp I shall spam exp oops I aready did.
could have been good honestly, i find this kind of story where mc should not hide their true power but nah mc goes "lets hide it"or smthing could have been grate but not my slice of pie
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Make this a small Harem ..... and focus on the story ..... please don't drop this fanfic ..... I support you..... Make this a small Harem ..... and focus on the story ..... please don't drop this fanfic ..... I support you.....
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i'd thought your mc will different like from other fan-fict dxd...im dissapointed...im still dont get it why most fan-fict dxd always steal fate protagonist dxd? i mean yes he pervert so what? as if you are saint
The fic is hard to read.... I mean as the i feel like mc is a hired goon as the story progress.... And character set up in the beginning feels like the author only watched 2 anime... I get is op with kamui but come on there is other options to choose from... At the same time mc is working for azazel like a hired goon it feels like he doesnt even have his own chooses in his life....
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- Acts like a 8th grader himself and acts 'cool' -Becomes a lapdog to Fallen Angels -Grammar is terrible - Chooses Demon Slayer template in DXD. DXD power level is way higher than Demon Slayer. And he did this because it's 'cool'. I want to kick the MC in his nuts.
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