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Well this is my first ever writing so lets see how it turns out.
First of all, if you have come here for plot, details, perfect pacing, character development, background story, etc. please don't read.
It is only wish fulfilment, so if you have come here to find things to be in systematic order, don't read it.
A boy fan of cooking and with his dream of attending totsuki by watching anime, had a rough life full of betrayal and guilt.
Now he will, embark on journey by gaining a system in the shokugeki no soma world, as the god of cooking admire him for his passion in cooking.
I don't own any of characters or the cover page
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I like the fan fiction please continue the story looking forward to more chapters 💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯👌💯👌👌👌💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯
i read first 10 chaps then dropped no character development, girls just suddenly falls in love with mc, the just literally just met a second ago and mc goes "will you give me the permission to pursue you" the girls says yes. no story development, the reincarnation process was more fleshed than other chapters, like 1 chapter where the mc reincarnates and the ending of the chap was mc being breast fed the next chap was mc in toutsuki for entrance exam(for 1st year highschool) no backstory whatsoever. author was like playing a Visual Novel he finished and plays again for the other route(where you usually fastforward or skip everything just to reach the turning point) PS Nakiri Erina was de aged from 15 to 13, guess author was a pedo or lolicon
Sigh, His training and other things are always timeskipped, his meeting with rindo was cliche but ur heavily altering the characters. I mean i understand that they are in AU SGS but whats the point of it if every girl turns into a blushing stuttering mess. It's idiotic and boring. You've already made them his future girlfriends on their first meeting. The girls are just empty husks. 1st impressions are important and I couldn't read past ch 6.
The setting is in Food wars and the MC is adopted by a food god. Nothing wrong there. However, the novel is very cliche and includes many moments that induce cringe in readers. Elements such as a elderly person harassed by a gang, followed by typical wuxia drama speech, then beat down. Followed by potential female partners surrounded by another gang. Overall, there isn't much to hate in this novel other than the cringe and cliche, but there's also nothing to like in the MC. There isn't an element that makes it worth withstanding the cliche moments of this novel.
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sentencing structure is terrible, storyline even though AU sucks, and the way the character acts is so cringe that if I could, the vote would be in the negatives rather then a VERY generous vote of 2.
Where's the AU Shokugeki No Souma Tag? Came for Shokugeki No Souma but all I got was every personality of SGS taken away [OOC]............
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Great job. At the time of the last chapter, the story remains interesting, although it follows the canon! One of the best books I've ever read. I hope the author will not give up writing!
A very good food wars fanfic.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Why is your story so cliché? There you use the same situation twice in quick succession with the response of the saved character being very cringe.
I like it it's very interesting and the story sounds like its gonna be fun so I'll give 5stars I hope u continue and don't mind if there any negative comments in the future as they don't know how hard it is tO come up with an idea but great story so far
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I give it 5⭐ for the interesting first few chapters..keep it up author [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
История полный мусор, начало буквально: я родился> я супер саян, где развитие персонажа? Да и мир автором изменен в угоду его персонажу, нету смысла это читать
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Hello there lovely author - kun I am away a of Food wars a perfect shonen anime I fasinated about being *Cough* being son restaurant owner in dam lock down. please my heartly request please don't drop it update in stable time and be regular I don't care about grammar that much read to fun
A little improvement in grammar but still an interesting fic, keep up the good work author san. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]