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Into the SCP Universe as The Lich.

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作者: DaoistCKto8n

4.19 (14 レビュー結果)

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After being transported to the SCP Universe, he is left confused and struggling to adapt with his new body and powers. As The Lich from Adventure Time, how will he overcome the obstacles and have a peaceful life? through power of course. He later learns this as time goes on, and as time goes on, threats emerge and his peaceful times would eventually end.

disclaimer; I do not own anything, Adventure Time or any properties of the SCP Wiki.

Warning: I am a young writer, and I am sometimes not aware of my mistakes and grammatical errors as well as any awkward sentencing. Feel free to give criticism, I will appreciate it.

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Kyran_Ambrosius

Honestly, it’s pretty good. My only real critique with it is why is the Litch so scared he is death. He said it himself. He is the ceaseless wheel. He is entropy.

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GaZe_Zero

I’m being honest it’s a great idea, and authors doing great for starting out. Issue is that this just completely neither fits SCP or the Lich. Mc is freely letting the foundation nerf him, and the foundation is acting nothing like it would. The Mc is too naive and doesn’t fit the Lich persona either, I feel like it would’ve been better to have the actual lich of an evil mc fill the role. For the author you gotta remember the Lich persona when writing, and that SCP is prob the most cruel gulag ever. If they found the Lich they would lock him up until the sun blows up, and would never let any reality bender live either.

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AkashicLibrary

Its joever. They giganerfed the lich to tank level. Not even city or country or world. Mfing tank level like bro thought he was gonna die from a tank shot.

1yr
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Ingenious_xestial

Hey I’m not sure if you will see this but I made you a book cover to hopefully draw more attention to your fanfic here it is also keep up the great work

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10mth
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Axolotl17

I absolutely love this story. There aren't enough SCP fanfics around. Please don't drop this story.

11mth
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MythicalFanFicGod

I quite liked the Fanfic. Although there was a few issues with spelling or leaving out some info that confuses the readers (though it gets better later on), but it was still really good, just a shame that we probably won't ever see anymore than this.

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Frizepize

I was expecting something else....oh well... this fanfic isnt't updating any soon, and won't ever.5 star on writing quality.2 star on story development 0/1 star on updating stability and 3 star in world background

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Flint_dad

it's not bad but it's poorly developed the protagonist is not following the story he told them on several occasions that he was the lich but he doesn't behave like one and he didn't test his own abilities and the development of the world is weak he said he would explain his origin but he only showed an illusion that didn't say anything but on the other hand the story is well written some errors in the creation of sentences the autoe has potential but he has to learn to better develop the world, the story and the characters

11mth
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exel
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Great story I hope you don’t leave this book

11mth
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James_Bondo

really a nice story. the good guy mentality is extremly nicely done and fits into the characters plan to stay low. the world as a whole is also pretty good even thou the storys still only a few chapters long. but all in all very good

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observer76

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Diobrando20999

Eu amei pena que eu acho que acabou,estou sendo sincero com minha avaliação e também achei bem criativo a história e isso vou escrever coisas aleatórias porque não quero 140 palavras gggghggghhggghhgh

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Lovecraft_Azathoth

Hello, although it's strange that I'm asking this now, but do you mind if I translate this work into Russian???????????????????????????????????????????????????

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Malthaael

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