Inazuma Eleven Thunderstorm

Dylan a 17 year old boy was playing football with his friends when one of them shot the ball too strongly and hit his head completely destroying his ear-drum and he died on the spot when he regained consciousness he was floating in a white space...

[Hello guys it's my second fan-fic so tell me if there is a problem in the story and all... also english is not my mother language so i am still learning it also i watch/play the french version of the anime/game since french is my motherly language so please just tell me if there is some grammar error and i will try to fix it]