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In world of Magic and Swords with Naruto System(Hiatus for a while.)
4.22 (52 レビュー結果)
概要
Luke walker a loner transmigrated in another world with Naruto system.
He have a lone wolf type personality and doesn't trust others easily.
"This time I'll live my life to its fullest and make trustworthy friends.... of course I'll search for my love of life this time....and won't be single...."
As Luke thought that his new adventure started in the world of magic.
WIRITING FOR FUN SO DON'T KNOW HOW IT WILL COME OUT BUT HOPE YOU GUYS WILL ENJOY.
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ENGLISH IS NOT MY FIRST LANGUAGE SO IT WONT BE ALL GOOD.
( And yea first 2 or 3 chapters writing is not that good but later I improved so don't stop just after reading only 2 or 3 chapters....hope you understand.)
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System makes little sense (why is uchiha bloodline and sharingan seperated. doesnt bloodline grants you the sharingan anyway) Mc is kind of arrogant and he doesnt deserve to be arrogant (no hard work or anything, 1 month in and he says stuff like ''i will save these children if they are worth it otherwise let them die) There are a few other points but this much should be enough
Tbh it was a good story until the parents chapter. I skipped all of it. Its cringe and completely useless. Why tf does he need a father? Why tf did he get emotional? Why tf did he accept a stranger as his father? Why tf does the stranger want a stranger(our mc) to be his son when with the power he holds it can be a plot to kill him or something? Was the mc using that person to get benefits and it was all a drama on MCs part? If our mc is using the oldman I will change my rating to five stars and I definitely recommend it.
Not gonna lie. I’ve seen a similarly titled Fanfiction before (Completed) and it was awesome. From beginning to the end it had me by the collar and I have similar hopes for this one. Good luck and I’ll get to reading tomorrow after I sleep. Night!
İ hope mc will get byakugan or =>tenseigan that way he could get far stronger than otsutsuki's and i hope he will get chakra fruit too ı really like this fan-fic keep writing and i want more detailed character developments from now on that is the only thing the story left and maybe all abilities list but with not common ones special or unique ones
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I've read the chapters and this is a rip off of another chinese fanfic named, In Different World with Naruto System. Hope this change as the story progress since it has the same start.
Really fun read, I'm enjoying every second of it. Keep it up author!...........................................................................
Ninpo:reviewing no jutsu! (I can't say myself that I am good in reviewing As this is my first time ever reviewing a novel in my web novel career :v) So as the story goes you would see that there would be some boring times and as always that would always or the least boring times in novel yes? The story goes pretty well and as the time goes the story itself would be more interesting (As to what I thought ofc everyone has their own preference) Hight hope for this novel As always keep up the good works......creator *respect*
Thanks for the good work ! 😁👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
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did u drop the novel author? need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more
Pretty good so far, I am hoping his hiatus won't go for too long. I can wait about 1-2 months but i really want it to end in like 2 more weeks? Anyway, story is good. It has that same feeling when i read these types of cultivating/fantasy genres that I read often. Honestly I am pretty bored with one of the fanfics I have read because it drastically changed to a slice of life, romance one instead of a system cultivating one but meh. Hope you can find something to use for continuing this fanfic or novel, I don't know.
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Author is a bit of a novice, but overall the book is great. Just some deviation from actual Naruto plot and some grammatical error.👍👍👍👍👍
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your story quite good i think..... but when more i read your story this is just like wuxia/xianxia novel or whatever is that I kind of don't like that
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._. Lazy Pig here, just read the goddamn book, it's pretty good ..........................................................................................................................................
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