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Reincarnated in Potterverse seven years before harry.......and politely waiting for the cannon to start.
Seriously, didn't want to risk messing with the plot without powers and actual MAGIC.
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This story's development is too fast while it is too slow, if you get what I meant. Too much information dumb scattered in all chapters,and almost are useless.
So the grammar and spelling are bad, readable, but confusingly bad sometimes. The writing style is annoying, you can get used to it, but it truly irritated me when you cant tell apart whether it is thoughts, speech, or narration. I dropped this because everything in this story is FORCED BY THE AUTHOR. There is no flow in the story, the MC says something and it happens. There is no way you will have any anticipation because you know the author will give him OP anything for cheap/free. Also the speech between characters is stiff.
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I really like the story and in my opinion if anybody says that you should quit and if the story isn’t good F off like just cause you don’t like it doesn’t mean others won’t so I just hope that the author if he likes writing the story that he continues so I know if he does definitely keep reading
I'm giving you a 5 🌟 🌟 🌟🌟🌟. Reasons? Simple I like your work and the flow of the story. Hope you would update daily even if it is only 1 chapter.
i very like your story but I think it it will have better to have Dumbledore do his own things and the mc this tings............ ,.,.,.........
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I like the reason he was reborn was very nice. im looking forward to your updates so far the book is decent i'd say keep up the good work and try to slow down a bit while i understand ages 0-11 are really slow and hard to write i wish you focused a bit more on it. anyways we shall see how hogwarts goes.
a good take on the whole harry potter novel. loving it till now. although there are some problems(not serious), i still like it. hope that it doesn't get dropped or stop updating cause i will really lose hope in humanity after all the dropped novels and fan-fic that i wanted to read to the end but couldn't.
Hope you will continous this story you have a big potentiel in there^^ ........................ ...................... ................ ......................
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Its a good start and no cliche plotlines of evil dumbledor or starting doing magic from baby days hope it will be intresting read and more chapters and long chapters
Sorry I have to stop here...I cant read a story written like a Chat group...good luck. Reader 1:Well this guy Harem Fan is a d1ck. Reader 2:Yup hes an old guy and does not know all the kids write like this now days! Author:WTF is going on???? Reader 2:Do not worry author he is just some simp that like novels in a standard format! Reader 1:Oh gotta go my mom just text me..................