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Levi Carter, a 17 years old boy has just finished his finals exam. On the way home his surroundings suddenly turned black. Seconds later he was on a grass plane......
Find out more on the next cha.. First chapter?
**The fanfict will cover 2 world the first one is my own world (it will just cover how MC got his magic) the second one is of course the Naruto World.
**Just writing for fun.
**Not My cover.
**I don't own Naruto or any of the characters in naruto. I do own my OC and all the characters in the first world if any.
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it seems good and has a No-Harem Tag So I give it 5 Stars but I won't read Until there is more Chapters keep going Author . . .... . . . .
The story is really interesting but after the mc started slowly becoming dumber I lost interest like there was so many better ways to make the mc a antihero and the author chose the dumbest one he could think of
Magic. it's cool. the book was good. I'm reviewing. I just wanted to give it a 5 star but now I need to write this long-ass sentence without even knowing that the post button just lit up. it lit up now isn't that just so nice.
Author is afraid to change the original story, but instead of making a character who wants the story to happen as in the manga, he makes him fail for the most forced reason that exists. Writing Quality 2 * Stability of Updates 4 * Story Development 1 * Character Design 1 * World Background 1 *
I'm honestly disappointed this story could've been much better if you didn't mini nerf the mc repeatedly. but the idea itself was pretty good
What can i say, it's not worth reading, went through the first 13 chapters and it's confusing af, and the main characters is way way way dumber than you can ever imagine, and the writing quality is trash without even talking about all the spelling mistakes and typos, like bruh do you even try?
just read the canon or watch the anime nothing change mc's just an extra just read the canon or watch the anime nothing change mc's just an extra just read the canon or watch the anime nothing change mc's just an extra just read the canon or watch the anime nothing change mc's just an extra
no harem no harem. yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes
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no harem and antihero tags have my attention. so when is the post button gonna show up? since i have no idea mostly because this is my first review
It's good story , good progressions of the characters and the explained magic Overall it's good [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
So far it's an extremely good fic, and I really liked the beginning, where he reincarnates in the world of magic, etc. Keep up the great work autor-san
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5 star cuz it's my fanfic and who doesn't like what they write Or is it just me, well whatever. If there is anything wrong pls write in the comments. I'll try to read all of them.