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After dying due to cancer at the age of 14 which was harvested by the government in an effort to study it and see if they could weaponize it. He is given another chance in Marvel to make his dream a reality to be the best Superman he can be.
To do that he needs to break any shackle that tries to bind him
Slow story development and newbie author
I do not own anything from DC, Marvel or anything from Invincible or any animes whatsoever
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This is on another level of edge. I'll explain in a second, but first. Writing quality: It's not as bad as some other fics that can be found on this site, but the dialogues and everything feel bare. It's like reading an unfinished script. Updating stability: Pretty consistent, few fics can reach over 100 chapters, and each chapter is decently long for this site. Character design: Never liked the whole blue, red and outside underwear Superman has, I like this. World background & Plot: Ohhh dear. This is, it's just bad. It's like seeing a twelve years old kid trying to write something gritty and edgy, and watching as he fails spectacularly. Mentions of r@pe, pedophiles are plenty, but it's made cheap by the reveal, feels incredibly insincere. It's what me of 7 years ago would have written. Overall: I give this a 2.4, it would have been lower, but I feel like the author is trying, but his story is lacking direction
Really like this novel, the MC made some good and realistc wishes, i like how author Make a realistic Marvel where cosmic beings and entitys are really aware of MC's actions and power, not like other novels where we Barely see cosmic beings and is Just lady death to be in the harem Really good novel keep the good work
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I like the idea and the story that you are writing, however the actual thing feels and reads like the notes you use when planning your story, it would be best to go back to the start and flesh everything out, also use " " for speech that's what you use them for.
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I see... Still needs improvement and a lot of better information about some characters. Sometimes the Author underestimate and overestimate some Marvel characters, and even the One Above All, Author underestimates the power of that Multiverse's creator. The MC even underestimates himself sometimes...
It's not that good, unfortunately. The idea is good but the implementation failed. It jumps from event to event it hardly feels like Marvel as there is hardly any interaction. He talks about being a hero and preventing the Avengers from becoming like Earth 616, but completely skips over everything. Now in DC and Ben 10 and you get as a small between note that he has taken care of almost all the problem e.g. Magneto. Or that he is in doubt whether the people deserve rescue etc.. But you have not seen any hero action except for the beginning. My tip to you is: Make a proper concept for the story with a constant story line and don't skip from event to event.
I liked it. But. Fkin up literally every X-Men characters with the excuse ''Dark Multiverse'' derailed me from the story. Like sure, make it Dark Multiverse, but why so sudden. It is like those authors that says: ''No NTR'' *in the middle of the story* ''Jk, jokes on you''. Then deletes it.
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i hope you dont put this the wrong way man, but i really do hope this novel gets re-written. first, at the description , he got a new chance at marvel then suddenly seeing dc getting mixed in the story the idea is great actually, but if you mix both franchise and all other universe, it will mess up the story. read upto chap 7. and it feels like.. things are all over the place bro.. one moment he flew from there to there then another moment robots created then another moment a base in jupiter then teleportation device.. come on man.. how long did he do those things? i know as well that this is a fiction and everything.. anyway goodluck brudda,
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7 chapters in and there hasnt been a line of dialogue with anyone other than the god. This story is the epitome of tell, not show. Very difficult and dry to read
First things first ignore the hatemongers for somebody just writing, for a fan fiction awesome keep trying to get better. little shallow but that's okay put out your story the way you want to. For the haters bunch of loud mouth mfers who haven't written a single thing show us you can do better consistently or shut up and try to be constructive.
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At first english is not my native language! I didn`t study enough english grammar. I studied more about spoken english) So the author`s grammar acceptable for me because I can understand what author writes. And that`s all what I need) About plot. I really like when Marvel combined with DC. Especially when such very powerful characters as Superman go to Marvel Universe with his imbalance abilities. So for the plot definitely 5 stars) I`ll follow the history) This review sounds good on my native language. It will be fun if some native english speaker says that his three-old child, who can`t write, would rather write this review)
It’s good to waste time but the story isn’t all that exciting there was a lot of things that he didn’t need to do and the main character is just to put it lightly a bad character
writing quality is meh (uncomfortable to read). other than that, above average. word word word word word word word word word word word word word word word word word word word word word
Great to see jean and the mc. Nice chapters. Great to see jean and the mc. Nice chapters.Great to see jean and the mc. Nice chapters.Great to see jean and the mc. Nice chapters.
too much... i mean too much... monologue about this and that which has no essentials to the proggress of the story or the plot. the story become so slow with too many chapter wasted for BS monologue. it supposed to be action novel coz it take on MCU but become monologue drama novel with less action as complimentary plot. reader wanna see the story progress more than just reading whats inside superman head.need more detail about mc, char in novel and world background but author put more how much mc think of something and how smart he is explaining something to his self not to others around him or to reader.it's getting boring to read it after chapter 30s... i think 5 more chapter if it's still like this, i will drop the novel.btw the idea of the novel is great but the way deliver it nees more improvement
Writing Quality - 3 Story Development - 2, Ancient One's puppet and cliche school drama. Character Design- 2, No conversations no nothing. How am I supposed to rate this? He's barely had any interactions in 10-11 chs. He also cries for every little thing. Updating Stability- I don't know about this Since it already has 30-40 chs So ill just give it a 5. World Background- Trash. Decide if it's DC or Marvel first.