/ Anime & Comics / In Lookism as a system for Daniel Park
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THIS IS MADE AFTER WATTPAD TRAUMATIZED ME. So to save and protect other people eyes. i took it in my hands to make a lookism fanfic.
Without Any Lg Sh*T. The fanfic is pretty simple.
A guy die. Guy meet Rob. Guy spin wheel. Guy gets To be A system. And gets the Perfect body Of Daniel park.
Guy happy.
Now the guy makes changes in the plot. He will show why Charles took interest in the second body.
He will show what is the ture power of it.
Wannna know what happens when you send a guy with as a system and gave him hack's.
Read to find out. Welcome to my fanfic. Hope you will stick with me to the end of it.
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So, I loved the story on Wattpad because I couldn't find a fic on Lookism where it wasn't LGBT romance, the story is very interesting and the updates are regular. I hope you don't drop it
the story is awesome nice characters but the grammar sucks and here I thought i had a bad grammar (sorry but im kinda straightforward) good thing im used to reading MTL novels but hey nice storty and you can fix the grammar cheer up bud you got a good imagination not everyone are good at grammar in their first time
the author's way of writing is confusing as f**k...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
i will come back here when the chapter is at least 20 to 30 and when you improve and edit things, but for now i will leave this 5 star here.
PLEASE give me more it's a good fic........................................................................................................................
One is the best novel I ever read ( read it on translate to Arabic ) So I don’t know in the grammar mist or anything, but is it one of the best novel I ever read…(the store. Basically this system correct the behavior of Daniel Park you don’t like the From the story)
Reading this made me realize how good MTL novels really are, thank you.