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Before there were 'Quirks', there was Styxx. Before Heroes, there was Styxx. Before Villans... you guessed it! There was Styxx. Follow the story of an overpowered MC that was somehow got sucked into becoming a student.
"I think there's a misunderstanding here! I know I look like this but I'm too old to be a student here! Wait a minute! Hey! What do you mean I have to pass the test to enter UA?!.... You actually let me pass?! How bad is your security?! I'm not supposed to have an ID! I'm not even supposed to exist!!"
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I don't own anything except my own original characters. Cover photo taken from google.
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I am gonna give myself a cheeky 5 stars as it is my own fanfic :) this is a fanfic inspired by The Immortal Mutant Teen by AinzOolGown0601 (one of my favorite novels on this site) and My Hero Academia. I hope you enjoy it and I'm always open to suggestions. Please do review and comment your thoughts throughout the chapters.
If you really want a gritty, rational MC then don't read this. Read at best the first 3 chapters and then go to a different book, the MC is immature; having no similarity to a man who's lived for hundreds of years. He's irrational, impulsive, unhinged and blatantly stupid. He takes in 3 fucking furry loli's who he has no fucking use for or obligation to help. It's pretty fucking disappointing since the MC that was described from chapter 1-3 is so fucking cool but then it becomes a basic fucking isekaitard who does shit for people for no fucking reason whatsoever.
as long as there is no harem, this is 5 stars, however if this is a harem, then the whole story is trash, however now it is good so yeah, just letting you know
For a guy over 600 years old this is some of the worst self controll ive ever seen and for that in droping it. their are too many Times he cant controll himself like cmon
Honestly, it was good until chapter 10. The MC was pretty cool but he suddenly became childish, he is over 600 years old and he just gets angry because he has been compared to a slaver (a misunderstanding). The thing that made me stop is when he suddenly adopts random girls as one of those Japanese isekai beta protagonists. I mean, it’s so cliché, why add OC like that to a story that has already well developed characters, I never understood that in the stories I read. Often it’s like this after: adopted girls want the MC to train them, he refuses, they make him puppy eyes, he accepts. And it’s like that for all their demands to the point where we wonder if the MC isn’t just a f*cking slave.
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Not that good, average grammar where you could find mistakes, updates are slow, MC is being a wannabe edge lord, there are so many different things in the plot which makes you think that the author hasn't even read the anime itself, literally not that good. I don't think it's really worth reading this as I can barley understand how the **** MC knows things as he's not capable of knowing.
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I hate hypocrites, probably deserves around a 3 star but hypocrytes get 1, Mc has 0 hesitation to kill innocent kids but he hesitates to kill allmight, Mc is basically a dude that hated all villains while liking the people who are basically a reflection of the church he hated so much, church kills you for being a threat to humanity, quirk society turns you into a villain for having a quirk that doesn't look or function "heroicly"
En los 3 primeros capitulos, te meten a un mc cruel despiadado, que vivió mas de 600 años matando sin distinción si eran vuenos o malos, solo lo mataban porque entraban a la carcel, luego sale de la carcel se vuelve un beta mc que si es heroe no lo mata aunque lo ataque a matar,si es villano lo mata, luego esta como tonto queriendo pensar con la polla, buscando un harem.
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this should be an anime lol 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
Such a unique idea definitely worth the five star rating. Keep up the good work cause i dont want this to be dropped. Tho it is fast paced it has a lot of potential
Not many chapters have been released at the time of this review, but so far it seems to be a well done fanfic and has an interesting concept that I haven't seen done in an mha fanfic before, only problem is slow updates but the author has said not to complain about that so not much can be done.
In 8 months you have 19 chapters and also if mc is hundreds of years old being immortal wouldn't there be one or two religions or have been documented by the church because under their perspective they had a evil immortal man or at least a old wise tale and if he was on that island for hundreds of years as time progressed i'm sure they outside world would have come there before and seen it and if they were killed by mc trying to see it the people would certainly send more people seeing it weird the last people who they sent didn't come back or somehow nobody outside the island has been there in hundreds of years and no one has bought the island to use for anything and to the outside world its just land nobody looking for land has bought said land and the government hasn't come to the island in hundreds of years either i mean if someone came to the island hearing no one can leave the government would think of him as a tyrant
Just the idea Makes me Go insane with exitement :D I am all for it!! 5 stars 🤩🤩🤩🤩 PLUS IT PROBABLY HAS TO DO WITH ME LISTENING TO "STORYTELLER" LOVE THE BEAT OOGOFODJDHCHFDHCCNDN HYPE OVER 9000!!!
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Just wow like Idee+Story and the potential of this fanfic is huge. I rly hope the Author dosen´t drop this for some stupid reasons. Everything els so far is top notch and i hope the Author keeps the rate of the updates up.
Just curious, is this fanfic inspired by “The Immortal Mutant Teen” novel and if so, please don’t be inspired by the authors release rate 🤣