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Immortal Sakura

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作者: steelgray

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The cover book image may be subjected to copyright.

Sorry, for stopping this book.

Maybe I will repair or continue this book in the future...
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A man that has been died, a girl that has been born. What connection from the two of them? This is ending life of the man and the beginning life of the girl.

I will make the story is going on at the different way but also still the same as the original plot.
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Sorry, my bad for not so very creative to write the story. I will try to improve my writings.

Thanks for your present and future advices.

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ClayRayne

I do not understand. This is supposed to be a 'reborn as' type fan-fiction but instead it is literally a brief overview of the original from sakura's POV. MC was originally male yet still nothing changes, continues to act female, likes Saskue, etc.. I don't get it.

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frangky
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This is a good fan fiction. I hope this novel doesn't get dropped. Also can Sakura go back to previous world? There is also a event when another otsutsuki came to naruto world.

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Galactic_Angel

The grammar isnt great, the plot is praticaly the same as the canon, but...BUT i still love this novel (idk why^^") ☆●☆~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~I hope ya dont drop ôwô

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Daoist168726

Gonna Be Honest. that picture although it isn't subjected to copyright, does come from a series called Touhou, and from what I can tell, that is Kaguya, an immortal princess. so I guess your kinda there..

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KUROTSUCHI

One of the greatest fanfic of all time. The character development is superb and well reasoned. The plot of the story is great, easy to folow, to remember and to understand. The Main Character of the story is full of complexity and creativity in creation.

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ANON404

Seems interesting so far. We will see if it can hold the quality. Can't say anything about story development as I've just started, so we'll see how it goes.

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AmberEyed_Nerd1412

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steelgray

Well, Our MC's love in first sight is not bound by the flow of original story but by the woman's pure love feelings. Our MC is a reincarnated person, from male to female. Although she has already drunk Meng Po soup to seal the past life memories and the memories were returned to her. She doesn't reject the love feelings not cause by the effect of Meng Po soup but she has recognized her identity. She has also enjoyed her life in Naruto World and will do as her original self but will also do differently for some problems.

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AmberEyed_Nerd1412

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Innactive333

This is honestly not good...It feels like you’re speedrunning this **** or something,It feels like I’ve read 5-6 years in 10 minutes with no time skip... LIKE WTH MAN

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fanfun
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like the concept because cultivation in Naruto would be dope but couldn't stand the fact she just followed through on cannon version without actually changing anything like at all felt like watching the anime with the same events replaying no change

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yulrir
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THIS IS JUST BASICALLY THE ORIGINAL STORY, BUT SAKURA IS A BIT OP. UGH! AND THE WAY YOU NARRATE THE WHOLE STORY INSTEAD OF ACTUALLY WRITING SOME DETAILS.

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The_Lord_of_Fanfic

Hanya mengikuti alur cerita yang sudah ada. Aku juga tidak mengerti, dia laki-laki 17 tahun dan menjadi sakura kurang dari 17, tetapi masih merindukan sasuke. Jijik sekali. Jika anda bukan guy, Saya beranggapan anda adalah perempuan. Lalu kalau begitu lebih baik dari awal buat tokoh perempuan. MC juga hanya mengikuti alur cerita saja, tidak berguna

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GGMissFortune

Putting aside the trash writing and uninspired characters, this fic would be merely mediocre according to this site's standards if not for one thing - MC acts as plot armor for original MCs of every world she's been to...

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PurpleSpring

This is just telling the story from sakuras point of veiw so far... Not a fanfic at all, even though it was supposed to be a reincarnation story or at least I think so... All in all, I'm disapointed at the story so far only telling the story of naruto from sakuras point of veiw, so far no changes even though the mc is a male reincarnated into a girl... Kinda weird that there is no reaction to it at all....

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Hultra
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Gt_Prince

plzzzzzzzzzz ..................................................... dont let usopp and luffy fall out and sakura could heal and strengthen the ship

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作者 steelgray